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一篇英语作文帮忙修改一下.（急）
帮忙看看有没有不合理和错误的句子,并帮忙修改一下,提一些建议,.修改完以后词数必须大于200.谢谢!
Growing Pains
How quickly time flies! Now I am a student in Grade 8. With time flying, more and more diffculties come to me, but I haven't been afraid of them since last year.
I remember, when I first came to middle school, I felt very comfortable. With the subjects getting more, I always felt tiere, with the homework getting more, I had less time to play.However , I dind't complain about it, but I tried to beat all of the difficulties. At last , I beated them and I gained a lot from it.
It seems growing pains are full of knowelege and experience. All of us can gain a lot from growing pains if we try to beat them. Now , I felt thankful to these pains. If these problems hadn't came to me , I wouldn't have had a chance of solving it and gotten such a lot gain.
It's true that beating difficultly will take you a lot,but it will bring you much more. You must have herd" You can't make an omellet withou making eggs."
All of us have growing pains, when we meet them,we shuoldn't get cold feet ,but we shuold be confident to beat them! There are nothing scary about growing pains. You won't know how much you will gain until you beat them. Growing ,it seems, are full of gains and pains!
帮忙看看有没有不合理和错误的句子,并帮忙修改一下,提一些建议,.修改完以后词数必须大于200.谢谢!
Growing Pains
How quickly time flies! Now I am a student in Grade 8. With time flying, more and more diffculties come to me, but I haven't been afraid of them since last year.
I remember, when I first came to middle school, I felt very comfortable. With the subjects getting more, I always felt tiere, with the homework getting more, I had less time to play.However , I dind't complain about it, but I tried to beat all of the difficulties. At last , I beated them and I gained a lot from it.
It seems growing pains are full of knowelege and experience. All of us can gain a lot from growing pains if we try to beat them. Now , I felt thankful to these pains. If these problems hadn't came to me , I wouldn't have had a chance of solving it and gotten such a lot gain.
It's true that beating difficultly will take you a lot,but it will bring you much more. You must have herd" You can't make an omellet withou making eggs."
All of us have growing pains, when we meet them,we shuoldn't get cold feet ,but we shuold be confident to beat them! There are nothing scary about growing pains. You won't know how much you will gain until you beat them. Growing ,it seems, are full of gains and pains!
How time flies!Now I am a student in Grade 8.With time passing by,more and more diffculties come to me,but I haven't been afraid of them since last year.
I remember,when I came to the middle school for the first time ,I felt very comfortable.With the subjects getting more,I always felt tired; with the homework getting more,I had less time to play.However ,I didn't complain about it,and I tried to beat all of the difficulties.At last ,I beat them and I gained a lot from them.
It seems growing pains are full of know ledge and experience.All of us can gain a lot from growing pains if we try to beat them.Now ,I felt thankful to these pains.If these problems hadn't come to me ,I wouldn't have had a chance of solving them and gotten such a lot gain.
It's true that beating difficultly will take you a lot,but it will bring you much more.You must have heard" You can't make an omellet withou making eggs."
All of us have growing pains,when we meet them,we shouldn't get cold feet ,but we shuold be confident to beat them!There are nothing scary about growing pains.You won't know how much you will gain until you beat them.Growing ,it seems,is full of gains and pains!Let's face the growing pains bravely and happily and i am sure we can turn them into motivation on the way to success.
文章的语法错误我已经修改,句尾加上一句话.你自己斟酌吧.
I remember,when I came to the middle school for the first time ,I felt very comfortable.With the subjects getting more,I always felt tired; with the homework getting more,I had less time to play.However ,I didn't complain about it,and I tried to beat all of the difficulties.At last ,I beat them and I gained a lot from them.
It seems growing pains are full of know ledge and experience.All of us can gain a lot from growing pains if we try to beat them.Now ,I felt thankful to these pains.If these problems hadn't come to me ,I wouldn't have had a chance of solving them and gotten such a lot gain.
It's true that beating difficultly will take you a lot,but it will bring you much more.You must have heard" You can't make an omellet withou making eggs."
All of us have growing pains,when we meet them,we shouldn't get cold feet ,but we shuold be confident to beat them!There are nothing scary about growing pains.You won't know how much you will gain until you beat them.Growing ,it seems,is full of gains and pains!Let's face the growing pains bravely and happily and i am sure we can turn them into motivation on the way to success.
文章的语法错误我已经修改,句尾加上一句话.你自己斟酌吧.