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dear jack,
i had a very unusual experience on sunday.at around ten o'clock in the morning,i was walking down the street when a ufo landed in front of me.you can imagine how strange it was!an alien got out and walked down center street.i followed it to see where it was going,and i was very surprised when it went into a souvenir shop.while it was looking at the souvenirs,the shop assistant called the police.before the police arrived,the alien left the shop and then visited the museum of the flight.while the alien was inthe museum,i called the tv station.isn't that amazing!
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dear jack,
i had a very unusual experience on sunday.at around ten o'clock in the morning,i was walking down the street when a ufo landed in front of me.you can imagine how strange it was!an alien got out and walked down center street.i followed it to see where it was going,and i was very surprised when it went into a souvenir shop.while it was looking at the souvenirs,the shop assistant called the police.before the police arrived,the alien left the shop and then visited the museum of the flight.while the alien was inthe museum,i called the tv station.isn't that amazing!
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Dear Jack:
It was an incredible story that none of you had ever experienced.The story happened last Sunday.I was taking a walk in the street at about 3 o'clock in the early morning when a UFO suddenly landed in front of me.I was so frightened that I couldn't say a word.An alien got out of the UFO and went along the main street which was very quiet.I thought I was brave enough to follow him.I just wanted to know what would happen next.He,I mean the alien went to a souvenir shop at the corner of the street.When he looked at the souvenir in the shop,the frightened shop assisstant called the police.But before the police arrived,the alien left the shop and turned to a flight museum.I saw that he wanted to stay there for a long time,I called the police and the TV station as well.I thought it would be a surprising news.
It was an incredible story that none of you had ever experienced.The story happened last Sunday.I was taking a walk in the street at about 3 o'clock in the early morning when a UFO suddenly landed in front of me.I was so frightened that I couldn't say a word.An alien got out of the UFO and went along the main street which was very quiet.I thought I was brave enough to follow him.I just wanted to know what would happen next.He,I mean the alien went to a souvenir shop at the corner of the street.When he looked at the souvenir in the shop,the frightened shop assisstant called the police.But before the police arrived,the alien left the shop and turned to a flight museum.I saw that he wanted to stay there for a long time,I called the police and the TV station as well.I thought it would be a surprising news.