四级作文修改2On students selecting lecturesIn modern society.more

四级作文修改2
On students selecting lectures
In modern society.more and more university allowed that student can selecting lecturers at free.For example,if you like the style of the Miss A,you can choice her.In addition,some sutdents want to go to class with his or her best friend who come from different class.They may choice the same teacher.There are many different factors deciding this phenomenon.
Among all these factors.the interesting plays a critical role.a lot of students like the funny lectures.Moreover,the relive atmosphere will make them happy,so as to study hard.Besides,some student want to go to class on afternoon,they may be selecting the class be arrange on the afternoon.
In my opinion,the student selecting lecturers at free has both advantages and disadvantages.For one thing,students can lerning with thire interesting and wil have the best effective by study.For another thing,If a large number of students like the same lecturers who have give.the classroom may be not large enuogh to student.In a word,It is time we take attention to the problem how to resolve students selecting lecturers.

On students selecting lectures
It’s quite interesting to realize that more and more universities allow students to select lecturers freely（自由选择地）.For example,if you like the style of Miss A’s lectures,you can choose(选择,动词,choice名词) hers(她的讲座,而不是她).In addition,some sutdents want to attend classes with his or her best friends who come from different classes.They are able to(可以) choose the same teacher.There are many different factors deciding this phenomenon.（这最后一句话很让人费解）：我改为：The decision made by the studets depends on many different factors.
Among all these factors,one factor (factor可以省略,这些因素中,有一个是占主导位置)plays a critical role.That is a lot of students like the funny lectures（有趣的讲座,不太好,可以写成：That is most of the students choose lecturers 演讲者with a high sense of humor）.Moreover,the lively 活跃的,热烈的atmosphere makes them happy and relaxing(轻松) so that they would study harder.Besides,some students(单复数要注意,这是基本) want to go to classes in the afternoon(不是on),they may select(别乱用be doing) the class be arranged in the afternoon.(最后两句话语义重复,改为：Besides,some students prefer classes arranged in the afternoon since they can have enough sleep in the morning.)
In my opinion,students selecting lecturers freely(没见过at free的说法) has both advantages and disadvantages.For one thing,students can learn（can后面怎么可能是learning）in an interesting atmosphere and gradually like study.For another thing,If a large number of students like the same lecturers ,the classroom may be not large enuogh to hold so many students.In a word,It is time we pay attention to(固定词组) the problem and try to resolve the problem in a best way.