雅思作文请求批改Many peole believe that scientific research should b

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Many peole believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary society,whether the scentific research should be superwised by government or by private company have drawn wide concern from the public.For my respective,the scientific research controlled either by government or by private company will bring us diversity merits respectively.
It is conspicuous that those scientific research closely releated to the world peace such as the research of manufacting the weapon must supervised by the government.To begin with,the government`s aim of producing the weapon was simply to maintain the world more stable.For this reason,the weapon was used for defending instead of invading other countries.On the contrary,only taking the profit into the priority consideration,will the private company sell their production to where conflict happens.In other words,where there is a war,there is a conducive weapon manufacted by the private company,which will make a detrimental effect on the world peace..
However,those scientific research connecting to our daily life should be grasped by the private company.Above all,the competition of scientific research made by different conpany would make it possible for for the consumer to buy a better functional production.Further more,with the purpose persuing the market needs,a multitude of private company would attemp to descend their cost throughout the scientific research,which is beneficial for the consumers to save a lot of money on what they intend to purchase.
To sum up,due to the above-mentioned reason,we may darw a conclusion that the government should control the scientific research associated with the peace.Inversely,we can obtain more advantages brought by the private company in our daily life.As far as I am concerned,it seems highly imperative for the government and private company to assert what scientific reasearch they should do to develop our society.

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