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请大家帮我改一下这篇英语口语稿!2-3分钟的!也可以不以我的基础改的! 请帮我写一篇吧! 谢谢
题目是:which holiday do you like best and why? Chinese New year holiday,Easter holiday or summer holiday?
我的回答是:My favorite holiday is summer holiday.Beacause I‘ts time is the longest then the others.And I can use the time to learn something that I heaven't chance to learn in peacetime. I can also have enough time to be a volunteer. then I can to help more and more people who need me to help.
furthermore, I can have sufficient time to rest. after all,the school life is too busy to take a rest.
请不要太难哦! 因为我只有中三水平! 谢谢了!^_^
请大家帮我改一下这篇英语口语稿!2-3分钟的!也可以不以我的基础改的! 请帮我写一篇吧! 谢谢
My favorite holiday is the summer holiday,as it's the longest holiday in a year.I can use the time to learn something that I haven't had a chance to learn before.I can also have enough time to be a volunteer,so that I can help more and more people who are in need.
Furthermore,I can have sufficient time to rest.The school life is always too busy for me to take a break.
再问: 能再长一些吗? 因为要说2-3分钟的! 谢谢!!^^
再答: My favorite holiday is the summer holiday, as it's the longest holiday in a year. I can use the time to learn something that I haven't had a chance to learn before. For example, I will be able to learn singing and dancing(......). This makes my life more colorful. I can also have enough time to be a volunteer, so that I can help more and more people who are in need. Helping people always makes me happy, and it is always valuable and meaningful for me, as I can learn a lot of things that I can never learn in schools. Furthermore, I can have sufficient time to rest. The school life is too busy for me to take a break. I can spend more time with my friends and my parents. I love the summer holiday most, because I always enjoy myself during the vacation.