神马作文网哪位大侠帮忙看下这篇英语短文有米有错误.
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哪位大侠帮忙看下这篇英语短文有米有错误.
Respectable Kyoto Animation Company:
I am a high school student from China.
Recently I am facinated about "Suzumiya Haruhi".Especially the animation which is made in your company.So I wonder if your company can tell me the details about the Suzumiya Haruhi's next movie.
It's my honour that give the question to KA Company.
I hope to receive your company reply soon.
Best wishes to KA comany!
Sincerely,
再帮忙检查下哪些用语可以更礼貌些,感激不尽!
Respectable Kyoto Animation Company:
I am a high school student from China.
Recently I am facinated about "Suzumiya Haruhi".Especially the animation which is made in your company.So I wonder if your company can tell me the details about the Suzumiya Haruhi's next movie.
It's my honour that give the question to KA Company.
I hope to receive your company reply soon.
Best wishes to KA comany!
Sincerely,
再帮忙检查下哪些用语可以更礼貌些,感激不尽!
".Especially the animation which is made in your company——》 ".Especially the animation made in your company
that give the question to KA Company——》 to contract with KA Company
I hope to receive your company reply soon.——》
I hope to receive your company's reply soon.
最后的改动可以用 it's such my hounor for me to contract you and hope you can have a nice day .yours sincerely .对了,该用句号的就不要用逗号 了
再问： contract?应该是contect吧……
that give the question to KA Company——》 to contract with KA Company
I hope to receive your company reply soon.——》
I hope to receive your company's reply soon.
最后的改动可以用 it's such my hounor for me to contract you and hope you can have a nice day .yours sincerely .对了,该用句号的就不要用逗号 了
再问： contract?应该是contect吧……