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初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!9
As you know,we are iatrology is very strong than to antiwuity.
But people's life-span is not than to the ancients.In my opinion nowadays life mode(生活方式,不知道是不是这样说)is not nature,that is very badfor our health.
from where i stand i think good habby is best medicament.Such as eat health food,sleep early,live has rule and so on.
Most disease wasn't build in a day.Have good habby just like good medicament.
错误很多,希望大家不吝教诲.
As you know,we are iatrology is very strong than to antiwuity.
But people's life-span is not than to the ancients.In my opinion nowadays life mode(生活方式,不知道是不是这样说)is not nature,that is very badfor our health.
from where i stand i think good habby is best medicament.Such as eat health food,sleep early,live has rule and so on.
Most disease wasn't build in a day.Have good habby just like good medicament.
错误很多,希望大家不吝教诲.
As you know,we are iatrology is very strong than to antiwuity (拼写错误,改为antiquity).
1.Iatrologys 是名,we are iatrology 就成了“我们是医学”
2.we are iatrology is very strong英语中不允许同一句话中有两个非并列的谓语动词,你的意思大概是想表达“我们的的医学非常强”,应该改为：our iatrology is very strong
3.比较的结构是; 形容词比较级 + than + 比较对象,所以应该如下：
our iatrology is much stronger than … (比较级不能用very修饰,改为much)
4.所比较的二者必须是同一类可比的人或事物,iatrology和antiquity不是一个逻辑范畴的东西,不可必,应该是现在的医学和古代的医学,这样才是可比对象.
5.修改; As you know,our iatrology today is much stronger than that of antiquity
But people's life-span is not than to the ancients.
1.people's life-span 改为 human life-span (人类寿命)
2.你是说人类寿命不如古代长吗?这个观点是否正确.不过可以给你提供两种修改方发功你选择.
a)human life-span at present is not longer than in the ancient time.(ancient是形容词必须放在名词前,所以另加time) 不如古代长
b)human life-span at present is longer than in the ancient time.比古代长
In my opinion nowadays life mode is not nature,that is very bad for our health.
1.生活方式 life style
2.nature是名词“自然”,错误同第一句,改为形容词natural
3.非限制性定语从句的关系代词不能用that,改为which.
4.对某事没好处以应该说 be bad to sth.而be bad for sb.to do意思是某人做某事没好处.
5.修改：In my opinion,life style nowadays is not yet natural,which is very bad to our health.
From where I stand I think good hobby is best medicament.Such as eat health food,sleep early,live has rule and so on.
1.From where I stand “从我所占的地方”想要表明什么意思?是否还是“依我看来”,如果是这样,直接和上一句衔接不也很顺理成章吗.
2.such as 是针对前面的句子讲的,不可以另起一句,such改为小写.后面列举的的动词不能用原形动词,改为不定式.
3.live has rule 改为live under a regular rule 有规律的生活
4.修改：and I think good hobby is the best medicament,such as to eat healthy food,to sleep early and to live under a regular rule and so on.（形容词最高级前必须有the）
Most disease wasn't build in a day.Have good hobby just like good medicament
1.Most disease wasn't build in a day.用过去时态不对；
2.Have good hobby just like good medicament,这是中式英语,have去掉改为a
3.修改：Most of diseases aren't accomplished in an action within a day,so a good hobby just likes a potion of good medicine (一剂好药)
1.Iatrologys 是名,we are iatrology 就成了“我们是医学”
2.we are iatrology is very strong英语中不允许同一句话中有两个非并列的谓语动词,你的意思大概是想表达“我们的的医学非常强”,应该改为：our iatrology is very strong
3.比较的结构是; 形容词比较级 + than + 比较对象,所以应该如下：
our iatrology is much stronger than … (比较级不能用very修饰,改为much)
4.所比较的二者必须是同一类可比的人或事物,iatrology和antiquity不是一个逻辑范畴的东西,不可必,应该是现在的医学和古代的医学,这样才是可比对象.
5.修改; As you know,our iatrology today is much stronger than that of antiquity
But people's life-span is not than to the ancients.
1.people's life-span 改为 human life-span (人类寿命)
2.你是说人类寿命不如古代长吗?这个观点是否正确.不过可以给你提供两种修改方发功你选择.
a)human life-span at present is not longer than in the ancient time.(ancient是形容词必须放在名词前,所以另加time) 不如古代长
b)human life-span at present is longer than in the ancient time.比古代长
In my opinion nowadays life mode is not nature,that is very bad for our health.
1.生活方式 life style
2.nature是名词“自然”,错误同第一句,改为形容词natural
3.非限制性定语从句的关系代词不能用that,改为which.
4.对某事没好处以应该说 be bad to sth.而be bad for sb.to do意思是某人做某事没好处.
5.修改：In my opinion,life style nowadays is not yet natural,which is very bad to our health.
From where I stand I think good hobby is best medicament.Such as eat health food,sleep early,live has rule and so on.
1.From where I stand “从我所占的地方”想要表明什么意思?是否还是“依我看来”,如果是这样,直接和上一句衔接不也很顺理成章吗.
2.such as 是针对前面的句子讲的,不可以另起一句,such改为小写.后面列举的的动词不能用原形动词,改为不定式.
3.live has rule 改为live under a regular rule 有规律的生活
4.修改：and I think good hobby is the best medicament,such as to eat healthy food,to sleep early and to live under a regular rule and so on.（形容词最高级前必须有the）
Most disease wasn't build in a day.Have good hobby just like good medicament
1.Most disease wasn't build in a day.用过去时态不对；
2.Have good hobby just like good medicament,这是中式英语,have去掉改为a
3.修改：Most of diseases aren't accomplished in an action within a day,so a good hobby just likes a potion of good medicine (一剂好药)