请会英文的帮我解答和修改我的句子 紧急

请会英文的帮我解答和修改我的句子 紧急
以下是我的英文问题 和我写的英文答案 请帮我检查和修改 哪里不妥 帮我语法等等的 奉上
Q :define perception and discuss how it may affect your life on a daily basis.
A :
For me,perception is a particular way of
understanding different kinds of things and it can be an ability to notice
something by seeing ,hearing,smelling etc..i think the perception is very
important in our daily life.Especially for the educator,to take care of
children ,the educator have to know what they think ,how they feels etc in
order to help children solve their problems.
In our daily life ,we can analyze people's
personality using perception to find out the answer ,for example,to observe
the people’s appearance and action to analyze ,if a person always put his head
down to talk with peoples ,and not face to face.Then this person’s action
show us that he is a very shy person and
maybe he is not good at talking to peoples etc.even just a small piece cake(nothing)
we still can find some special things in our daily life,just using the
perception.
In
my experience at daily life,I using the perception to face many different
kinds of things,for example,I always look at peoples faces,in order to guess
what they were thinking,or maybe thought their actions to guess what’ were
happened…questions.

As we all know,perception is a particular way of
understanding,like different kinds of things and it also can be knows as an ability to notice
something clear by/throug touching,seeing ,listening,felling etc.
it is so important in our daily life especially when something you should pay attention.For the educator,like a teacher,have to take care of the
children ,it's better to know what they thought ,how they feel in
order to solve their problems they met no matter in life or study.
In daily life ,we can use perception to analyze people's
personality to find out the answer ,such as,observing people’s appearance and action ,if one always put his head down when talk with others ,do not face to face.to some extent that meanings a shy person and
maybe he is not good at society activety .even just a small piece cake(nothing)
we still can find some special things ,just using the
perception.
For me,what I use with the perception is to face many different
kinds of things,for example,I usually looking at other's faces,it's not only a polite when talking but also can guess what want express,or what had happened thought their body language …questions.楼主你的词汇量貌视不是很多啊
再问： 可以再帮我加些句子 让这篇读或看起来 更通顺 更完整吗 更 make sense 吗 谢谢喔 (我也知道我的词汇量不是很多 已经尽了了)
再答： 你这是干什么用的？
再问： 关於沟通技巧的课 communication 写个文
再答： 沟通技巧，一般不是讲面部表情和 body laguage 的吗？像国外的电视剧lie to me 就是讲观察人的一举一动，或者下意识的动作之类的，有点远了，你这样写的也很好的，当然如果你是老师肯定不行，交作业的话，可以的
再问： 不能帮我改些句子吗 若是你的话 会怎麼回答这问题呢? 感觉我的这篇文 需要加些 或改些适当的句子 帮帮我修改一下吧
再答： 我毕竟不是你，这是你的想法，我已经简单的改了下，因为我也不会，这篇文，你对洞察力的解释不是很完善，然后discuss 如何影响你的，你也说的不是太清楚，这里应该指，敏锐的洞察力在你的交际中发挥的作用，通过别人的动作，知道他的心情，习惯性的动作表示什么什么之累的，谎言啊，，，，，性格是什么样的