请帮我修改我写的英文句子 请帮我修改语法 >< 紧急

请帮我修改我写的英文句子 请帮我修改语法 >< 紧急
以下 是我写的东西 需要有会英语的帮我修改我的语法句子 如果不通顺的地方 请帮我修改!#1
It’s my first day for doing my internship,I
feel a little bit nervous when I have to start working with children.During
today’s internship,I pay a lot of attention to watch and observing every child’s
action and emotion.I play with them during most of the time,I clean the toy
for them.When the educator changes the diapers for them,I watch her clean
every child’s pee and poo.I observe children and educator’s routine.When I
finish today’s observation,I feel like I learn so much thing about how to take
care these children,especially for toddler age group.I feel so hard to become
an real educator,because they have to do almost everything for there kids.
#2
This is my second week for doing my
internship.When I came to see the children in the morning,they seems like don’t
remember me at all,but it’s ok,I know they will get to know me in the future.
So for today’s internship,I did many things,I went to the park with children
and educator in the morning,I play with these kids and doing my observation as
well.After finish almost 1 hours outdoor play,we go back to the classroom,
because it was lunch time,so I help the educator to set up the table and chair
for children,and then I used wet napkin to clean every kids’ hands.After I
observe they finish eating,
We did the art activities for today,the
educator take every child’s hands to do the finger printing.This is a very fun
activity for them,as I can see,most of them are very interest and happy to
play finger printing,only few kids were not interest to play fingerprinting.
From
today’ observation,I lean that every child have different interest,some of
children does like to play fingerprinting,some of them does not.We can not to
forces some of them to participate in the same activities,

1.and observe every child’s actions and emotions
I feel like that I have learned so much thing
how to take care of these children
for their kids
2.they seems like don’t remember me at all---->it seemed that they didn't remember me at all注意时态一致.后面那个but大写成为另一个句子.
and doing my observation as well---》doing 改成do .as well重复了,删掉
后面好多时态混用 自己能看出来就修改一下,不要一会现在时一会过去时的.