神马作文网自己写的句子麻烦告诉帮忙看下 修改下其中的错误
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自己写的句子麻烦告诉帮忙看下 修改下其中的错误
A large number of undergraduates are eager to take their own undertaking than can solve the porblem of employment sloved what create a better life.
A large number of undergraduates are eager to take their own undertaking than can solve the porblem of employment sloved what create a better life.
这个句子,结构上有很大的问题,让人看不懂
很多的毕业生迫切的想要事业什么,解决的就业问题,开始新的生活.
逻辑尚不能理解
再问： 写的就是很多毕业生想要自主创业并且自主创业可以解决社会的就业问题同时还可以是大学声生活的更好
再答： a large number of graduates are eager to set up their own businesses, because entrepreneurship can solve the social employment problem and help the college students creat a better life
再问： 那个企业家身份的词还有其它的代替的么 还不用原因状语从句用定语从句表达可以么
再答： a large number of graduates are eager to set up their own businesses, which can solve the social employment problem and help the college students creat a better life非限制定语从句
很多的毕业生迫切的想要事业什么,解决的就业问题,开始新的生活.
逻辑尚不能理解
再问： 写的就是很多毕业生想要自主创业并且自主创业可以解决社会的就业问题同时还可以是大学声生活的更好
再答： a large number of graduates are eager to set up their own businesses, because entrepreneurship can solve the social employment problem and help the college students creat a better life
再问： 那个企业家身份的词还有其它的代替的么 还不用原因状语从句用定语从句表达可以么
再答： a large number of graduates are eager to set up their own businesses, which can solve the social employment problem and help the college students creat a better life非限制定语从句