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dear panpan,
my family and i are going to travel allover france.so,maybe i need your help.
could you take care of my pet dog?of course you will say you can.you can call the pet pig Duoduo.
could you please do these things everyday?play toy ball with him ,and talk with him.and could you feed him wieh delicious food?because he os very greedy.don't forget give him water.cpuld you please do exercise with he everyday?i don't want him to becomes lazy.
Thanks,
Bow
dear panpan,
my family and i are going to travel allover france.so,maybe i need your help.
could you take care of my pet dog?of course you will say you can.you can call the pet pig Duoduo.
could you please do these things everyday?play toy ball with him ,and talk with him.and could you feed him wieh delicious food?because he os very greedy.don't forget give him water.cpuld you please do exercise with he everyday?i don't want him to becomes lazy.
Thanks,
Bow
with he 改成with he ,因此在介词后作宾语要用宾格的him.
to becomes 改成to become .因为不定式是:to+动词原形
forget give him 改成forget to give him
拼写错误:cpuld --could ,os --is,
其它的就没什么错了.此文写得很好.
to becomes 改成to become .因为不定式是:to+动词原形
forget give him 改成forget to give him
拼写错误:cpuld --could ,os --is,
其它的就没什么错了.此文写得很好.