神马作文网请求高人帮忙批改英语专四作文
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请求高人帮忙批改英语专四作文
A Pollution Tax
Currently,government agencies consider levying environmental taxes on private car owners an effective way to protect environment,which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.With reference to my standpoint,private car owners should be taxed for pollution.
To begin with,it is not far for private car owners.No one can deny the fact that many public vehicles are not environmental friendly.If pollution taxes are only levied on private car owners,unfairness may about.Even worse,social harmony may be destroyed.
Besides,it is clear that private car owners' economic burden will be increased.Because of a pollution tax,As we all know,the price of oil is on the rise,which has already been a headache for private car owners.In that case,extra taxes like a pollution tax may freak them out and increase their financial burden.
Taking the three factors into account,I don't think it a good measure to private car owners foe pollution.What's more,government agencies should take action to develop new energy to cut down car pollution.
A Pollution Tax
Currently,government agencies consider levying environmental taxes on private car owners an effective way to protect environment,which has aroused a heated discussion among the public.With reference to my standpoint,private car owners should be taxed for pollution.
To begin with,it is not far for private car owners.No one can deny the fact that many public vehicles are not environmental friendly.If pollution taxes are only levied on private car owners,unfairness may about.Even worse,social harmony may be destroyed.
Besides,it is clear that private car owners' economic burden will be increased.Because of a pollution tax,As we all know,the price of oil is on the rise,which has already been a headache for private car owners.In that case,extra taxes like a pollution tax may freak them out and increase their financial burden.
Taking the three factors into account,I don't think it a good measure to private car owners foe pollution.What's more,government agencies should take action to develop new energy to cut down car pollution.
what the hell is your standpoint?agree the tax or not?
why first paragraph states agree but following three paragraph deny?
再问： 晕,第一段少打了not,应该是shouldn't thanks,请帮我看看哪里有问题
再答： Grammatically ok but too less content, not convincing enough! To indicate the unfairness, think about the following questions: 1, Fair? if levying tax on every car owners but they drive in different frequencies. 2, Fair? if taxing the same but as we know cars have different energy efficiencies. 3, Solution. Tax on fuel? 4, Solution. Tax with different levels for different car types. 5, Comment. Tax can only be the last way to control pullution, and must be a temporary method. Because, owning private car is an inevitable tendency whereas car manufacturer could only offer 'polluting cars', same as I couldn't imagine sporters should be taxed for their more CO2 breathing out than normal people.
再问： 这是考场应试作文，必须要立场明确，且后面的论点一定要支撑住你的观点，大侠提出的几点都不利于证明shoundn't be taxed啊。 作文有固定的格式的，第一段表明立场，第二段证明立场，第三段总结。（这是套路，因为也是这样改作文的） 下面的回答者警方拉拉队 也提出了论据不充分的问题，我已经适当加了些。 谢谢你的回答
why first paragraph states agree but following three paragraph deny?
再问： 晕,第一段少打了not,应该是shouldn't thanks,请帮我看看哪里有问题
再答： Grammatically ok but too less content, not convincing enough! To indicate the unfairness, think about the following questions: 1, Fair? if levying tax on every car owners but they drive in different frequencies. 2, Fair? if taxing the same but as we know cars have different energy efficiencies. 3, Solution. Tax on fuel? 4, Solution. Tax with different levels for different car types. 5, Comment. Tax can only be the last way to control pullution, and must be a temporary method. Because, owning private car is an inevitable tendency whereas car manufacturer could only offer 'polluting cars', same as I couldn't imagine sporters should be taxed for their more CO2 breathing out than normal people.
再问： 这是考场应试作文，必须要立场明确，且后面的论点一定要支撑住你的观点，大侠提出的几点都不利于证明shoundn't be taxed啊。 作文有固定的格式的，第一段表明立场，第二段证明立场，第三段总结。（这是套路，因为也是这样改作文的） 下面的回答者警方拉拉队 也提出了论据不充分的问题，我已经适当加了些。 谢谢你的回答