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请帮忙修改一下英语读后感
The feeling after reading
Before read The Omega Files,I know the courage and effort is very important!The story of the Hawker and Jude courageously,they are not afraid of danger,try to finish the task to organization.Eventually,though some riddles cannot be solved,but the process is very interesting.In the future,I want to learn more!
请问这片读后感有没有毛病?
请帮忙修改一下英语读后感
The feeling after reading
Before read The Omega Files,I know the effort of courage is very important!In this story,Hawker and Jude are brave,they are not afraid of danger,try to finish the task for organization.Eventually,though some riddle cannot be solved,but the process is very interesting.In the future,I want to learn more!
1名词所有格有错误
2句子有不通
3为了什么应该用for
4riddle复数不变
更正过的见上