神马作文网英语达人进!帮我看看有没有语法错误~
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英语达人进!帮我看看有没有语法错误~
The thing I most cherish is this bracelet.My parents brought it to me from Shanghai.This bracelet is made of silver,it is not very expensive.When I got this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it is the first time that my parents have bought the jewelry to me.I love my parents,I love my family.
The thing I most cherish is this bracelet.My parents brought it to me from Shanghai.This bracelet is made of silver,it is not very expensive.When I got this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it is the first time that my parents have bought the jewelry to me.I love my parents,I love my family.
This bracelet is made of silver,(yet) it is not very expensive. 缺连词
When I (received) this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it (was) the first time that my parents have bought (a) jewelry to me. 注意时态和单复数
(Therefore) I love my parents. 毋须重复,且增加连贯性
欢迎交流~
When I (received) this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it (was) the first time that my parents have bought (a) jewelry to me. 注意时态和单复数
(Therefore) I love my parents. 毋须重复,且增加连贯性
欢迎交流~