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谁能帮我改一下下面这段英文!最好2点之前改完!
Last week Friday was my birthday,although I have not told me the roommate,but they have known,as soon as because my mother telephoned.After that day turns off the lights,at that time I was cleaning the teeth,saw opposite I shared a table just and her roommate look at me,I think am very strange,turn the head when wanted to have a look to have anything,I tarry!My roommates are carrying one to insert the full candle's cake to face me to walk,by now opposite sharing a table faced me with hers roommates to shout loudly:“wishes your happy birthday!”I very happy am also very affected,they gave back to me to sing the birthday quick song!I thought that I am very happy,thank you!
Last week Friday was my birthday,although I have not told me the roommate,but they have known,as soon as because my mother telephoned.After that day turns off the lights,at that time I was cleaning the teeth,saw opposite I shared a table just and her roommate look at me,I think am very strange,turn the head when wanted to have a look to have anything,I tarry!My roommates are carrying one to insert the full candle's cake to face me to walk,by now opposite sharing a table faced me with hers roommates to shout loudly:“wishes your happy birthday!”I very happy am also very affected,they gave back to me to sing the birthday quick song!I thought that I am very happy,thank you!
以下是改过的文章：
Last Friday was my birthday.I didn't tell my roommates about it,but when my mother called me by phone,they all knew it.That night when the light was turned off,I was brushing my teeth.The roommate who shared the same table with me was looking at me and I felt somewhat strange.I turned back to find a birthday cake with candles in it on a table,and all the roommates were around it,shouting loudly to me "Wish you happy birthday!".I was too happy to believe it,but it was true.I was so touched and moved.I joined them and we sang brithday songs together.Dear roomates,you gave me a surprise and happy night on my birthday,I was very happy for that.Thank you all!
Last Friday was my birthday.I didn't tell my roommates about it,but when my mother called me by phone,they all knew it.That night when the light was turned off,I was brushing my teeth.The roommate who shared the same table with me was looking at me and I felt somewhat strange.I turned back to find a birthday cake with candles in it on a table,and all the roommates were around it,shouting loudly to me "Wish you happy birthday!".I was too happy to believe it,but it was true.I was so touched and moved.I joined them and we sang brithday songs together.Dear roomates,you gave me a surprise and happy night on my birthday,I was very happy for that.Thank you all!