英语句子改错.Correct the following items to conform to AP style 1.

英语句子改错.
Correct the following items to conform to AP style
1.The twenty-five-year-old man wept as he left Hattiesburg,Mississippi.
2.This November 10th will mark our anniversary.
3.Don’t park the car on Rodeo Dr.Instead,park it at 12 Davies Street.
4.They spent 130 dollars to buy a new set of nose rings.
5.Smoots moved to the North because the people there are so nice.
6.At 7 p.m.this evening,the rodeo will begin in the Town Square.
7.Yesterday,the Terrorists blew up their home at 123 Melrose St.
8.22 seamstresses were needed to mend the prom dresses.
9.About 5 percent of the professors have lost their hair.
10.Miss Smith bet fifty dollars that her brother weighed more than a 1964 Chevy.
11.Estalene Smoots dropped her french class the 1st day of school.
12.Sadie Hoots won 3,200,000 dollars on Wheel of Fortune.
13.Frustrated that their professor required them to eat fried rutabagas,the students walked out of class at 9 a.m.this morning.
14.The office manager had twenty-one plants,sixty-two cats and two puppies.
15.President Aubrey Lucas is originally from Compton,California.
16.On October 25th,Ruth Ann Bobetski will turn 41.
17.Goober Hicks lives at 10 West Hardy St.He used to live in a rundown shack at 2803 Williamsburg Rd.
18.Abby gave birth to a nine pound baby boy.
19.The President invited me to dinner at the white house,but I could not fit it into my schedule.
20.Barney the dinosaur will be executed on Tuesday,November 2.
21.The Baby City baseball team lost their final game two to one and climbed dejectedly back onto their bus.

1.The twenty-five-year-old man wept when he left Hattiesburg,Mississippi.
when引导状语
2.This November 10th will be marked as our anniversary.
mark此处用被动,意为：被记做,被标记为.
3.Don’t park the car at Rodeo Dr.Instead,park it at 12 Davies Street.
把车停在陈么地方,用介词at
4.They spent 130 dollars on buying a new set of nose rings.
spend+金钱+on；spend +时间+in
5.The Smoots moved to the North because the people there are so nice.
表示Smoot一家人,前要加The.
6.At 7 p.m.this evening,the rodeo will begin in The Town Square.
The Town Square.为专有名词,必须全部大写!
7.Yesterday,the Terrorists blew up their houses at 123 Melrose St.
恐怖分子引爆了house,不是引爆了home
8.22 seamstresses were needed to mend prom dresses.
去掉the,修补舞会服装,不需要the
9.5 percent of the professors have lost their hair.
去掉about,句子成分完整.若加上about,则句子缺少主语!
10.Miss Smith bet fifty dollars while her brother weighed more than a 1964 Chevy.
前后2部分为转折
11.Estalene Smoots dropped her French class the 1st day of school.
french 为动词,意为做法国菜
12.Sadie Hoots won 3,200,000 dollars on the Wheel of Fortune.
Wheel of Fortune幸运轮,专有名词前要有the,还有一种改法,加上引号“Wheel of Fortune”则前不用加the了
13.Frustrating that their professor required them to eat fried rutabagas,the students walked out of class at 9 a.m.this morning.
the students 是Frustrating（主动）,不是Frustrated（被动）
14.The office manager had twenty-one plants,sixty-two cats and puppies.
puppies 复数小狗,不可数,前不能加two.改法：直接去掉或把two变成some,若非要表示2只小狗,可以这样改：two herds of puppies,2窝小狗!
15.President Aubrey Lucas is from Compton,California.
be from 由什么地方来,是什么地方人的意思 (有祖籍那里的意思)所以originally重复!
16.On October 25th,Ruth Ann Bobetski will turn to 41.
turn不及物动词
17.Goober Hicks lives at 10 West Hardy St.He used to live in a rundown shack on 2803 Williamsburg Rd.
on road固定搭配!
18.Abby gave birth to a nine-pound baby boy.
nine-pound为形容词!
19.The President invited me to have dinner at the white house,but I could not fit it into my schedule.
句型：invite sb.to sth.
20.Barney the dinosaur will be executed on Tuesday,November 2nd.
11月2日,用序数词.
21.The Baby City baseball team lost their final game two to one and climbed dejectedly back into their bus.
bus应该是into,onto成爬到bus车顶了,不合逻辑.
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