英文高手们,可以帮我修改我的英文写作 Children Should Be Require to Help with H

英文高手们,可以帮我修改我的英文写作 Children Should Be Require to Help with Household Chores
第一段请说明是否同意,为什麼?
第二段请说明若是将来成为父母,你会怎麼做?
In my opinion,I definitely agree with it.Household chores should not always belong to parents,nor should be always done by Mom.It is all family members’ duties,including children.In the past,children were more considerate than those children nowadays.They gave their parents a hand as they needed,and did their best on their school works as well.They had no excuse to keep them from doing these nuisances.Why the children’s abilities today were inferior to the children in the past?I think it attribute to parents’ attitude to children.
Many parents presently always help their children as possible as they can,needless to say asking them to share house works.They believe that it could diminish their burden in this competitive society.Nevertheless,I consider it wrong.Household chores are not trivial things,they are virtually the part of our lives.If I become parents someday,I’ll ask my children to share house works.I’ll instill my value to let them know the purpose,for training them to tackle problems in short time and to distinguish the priority to every affair.That way,they can grow up with power equipment and they will become a successful person in the future.

In my opinion,I definitely agree with it.Household chores should not always belong to parents,nor should (they)be always done by Mom.It is all family members’ duties(duty),including children.In the past,children were more considerate than those children nowadays.They gave their parents a hand as they needed,and did their best on their school works as well.They had no excuse to keep them from doing these nuisances.Why (are)the children’s abilities today were(去掉were) inferior to the children in the past?I think it attribute to parents’ attitude to children.
Many parents presently always help their children as possible (possiblly)as they can,needless to say asking them to share house works.They believe that it could (may)diminish their burden in this competitive society.Nevertheless,I consider it wrong.Household chores are not trivial things,they are virtually the part of our lives.If I become parents someday,I’ll ask my children to share house works.I’ll instill my value to let them know the purpose,for training them to tackle problems in short time and to distinguish the priority to every affair.That way,they can grow up with power (powerful)equipment and they will become a successful person in the future.
我同意你的观点.授之以鱼,不如授之以渔