七年级上英语作文修改三篇文章.Mid-autumn Festival Mid-autumn Festival is co

七年级上英语作文修改
三篇文章.
Mid-autumn Festival
Mid-autumn Festival is coming.It's on the fifteenth day of the eighth lunner month. Ben and Kitty have a holiday.They eat the moon cakes.There are many different kings of moon cakes,such as the sweet ones,the salty ones.Then,they watch the moon.They all enjoy it.It's big and beautiful.And they have a nice dinner with their family. After dinner, Kitty and Ben play the games happily.At last,Kitty and Ben enjoy this festival.They were very happy.
A picnic
Last Sunday,Ben and Kiity invited their friends to have a picnic.It is sunny.It's warm.They went to the Star Park. It took them half an hour to go there by bus.Then they had lunch. They brought the hot dogs, drinks,crisps,chicken wings and ate on the grass.After lunch, they played together.They flew kites,played the games and ran fast.They felt verry happy. At four o'clock,they went home.They thought this picnic was very interesting and they enjoyed it.
A happy day
Today is Sunday,my birthday.I got up early.And my friends came to my flat at nine o'clock. First, we had a birthday cake.My friends sang a birthday song to me. I blew the candles and cut the cake.I shared a lot of delicious food and drinks with my friends. After dinner,my friends bought some presents for me.I like them very much.Then we played games happily.We enjoyed watching TV. What a happy day we had.
句子漂亮点噢!改动后大概意思和这差不多,但是生词别出现的太多.是七年级噢~
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Mid-autumn Festival
Mid-autumn Festival is coming.It's on the fifteenth day of the eighth【of August on lunner calinder.Ben and Kitty have a holiday.They eat the moon cakes.There are many different kings【kinds】 of moon cakes,such as the sweet ones,the salty ones.Then,they watch the moon.They all enjoy it.It's big and beautiful.And they have a nice dinner with their family.After dinner,Kitty and Ben play the games happily.At last,Kitty and Ben enjoy this festival.They were very happy.【你这篇文要写成什么时态的啊?前面都是一般现在时,最后一句却用过去时.个人认为这篇文章应该用过去时去描述发生过的事,如果你们老师没有特殊要求的话,就用过去时.那么,此文的所有时态都要改成过去时.】
A picnic
Last Sunday,Ben and Kiity invited their friends to have a picnic.It is【was】 sunny 【and warm】.They went to the Star Park.It took them half an hour to go there by bus.Then they had lunch.They brought the hot dogs,drinks,crisps,chicken wings and ate on the grass.After lunch,they played together.They flew kites,played the games and ran fast.They felt verry happy.At four o'clock,they went home.They thought this picnic was very interesting and they enjoyed it.
A happy day
Today is Sunday,my birthday.I got up early.And my friends came to my flat at nine o'clock.First,we had【用bought更好】 a birthday cake.My friends sang a birthday song to me.I blew the candles 【out】and cut the cake.I shared a lot of delicious food and drinks with my friends.After dinner,my friends bought【这里最后用brought带来】 some presents for me.I like them very much.Then we played games happily.We enjoyed watching TV【together】.What a happy day we had.
你作文写得不错,语法错误很少,看来你英语成绩很优秀.