神马作文网麻烦大家帮我看一下这篇文章有什么语法错误吗
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麻烦大家帮我看一下这篇文章有什么语法错误吗
Look,I don't know where to start.When we first get together,I
can't believe how good the things are going.It is too good to be
true.My happiness,it is closer to me slowly.Whenever I think of
that scene I would feel very happy.You?Are you happy?I'll
remember every word you said to me.Because that is the most
precious gift.My love would never be finished.But you are my
favorite.To end here.Not many words.You experience a person
can only slowly.
（你看,我不知道从哪里开始.当我们第一次见面时,我都不敢相信会有多美好,这是好的是真实的.我的幸福,正在慢慢向我靠近.每当我想到那个场景时我都会感到非常幸福.你呢?我会记住你对我说的每一句话,因为那是最珍贵的礼物.我有爱不完的人.但是你是我最爱的.到这里就结束了.没有太多的话语.只能你一个人慢慢体会.）
Look,I don't know where to start.When we first get together,I
can't believe how good the things are going.It is too good to be
true.My happiness,it is closer to me slowly.Whenever I think of
that scene I would feel very happy.You?Are you happy?I'll
remember every word you said to me.Because that is the most
precious gift.My love would never be finished.But you are my
favorite.To end here.Not many words.You experience a person
can only slowly.
（你看,我不知道从哪里开始.当我们第一次见面时,我都不敢相信会有多美好,这是好的是真实的.我的幸福,正在慢慢向我靠近.每当我想到那个场景时我都会感到非常幸福.你呢?我会记住你对我说的每一句话,因为那是最珍贵的礼物.我有爱不完的人.但是你是我最爱的.到这里就结束了.没有太多的话语.只能你一个人慢慢体会.）
主要是时态 和一些句子不完整 有些地方有点别扭 下面是我改的：
Look,I don't know where to start.When we first met,I couldn't have imagined how good the things are going now.It is too good to be true.My happiness is getting closer and closer to me gradually.Whenever I think of that scene I feel very happy.What about you?Are you happy?I'll remember every word you've ever said to me.Because that is the most precious gift I received.I have the capacity to love many people.But you are and will always be the one I love the most.The passage will end here.There aren't many words but it's sufficient to express my feelings which you can experience through my words.
Look,I don't know where to start.When we first met,I couldn't have imagined how good the things are going now.It is too good to be true.My happiness is getting closer and closer to me gradually.Whenever I think of that scene I feel very happy.What about you?Are you happy?I'll remember every word you've ever said to me.Because that is the most precious gift I received.I have the capacity to love many people.But you are and will always be the one I love the most.The passage will end here.There aren't many words but it's sufficient to express my feelings which you can experience through my words.