神马作文网麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇文章,语法错误,和连贯性,
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麻烦大家帮我修改一下这篇文章,语法错误,和连贯性,
good morning,everyone.now i'm going to introduce my family to you.may my home is not the best,but i love my home.i love my parents and my cute little dog.
i think i live in a happy family.my parents are both keen on their job,while they never forget to love our home.my parents usually respect what i thought and what i want to do.they give me a very free space to grow.so here i live happiness.unfortunately,my grandparents have living in heaven for several years and i think there they also live very well.
this is my family,a happy harmonious home.i love it
good morning,everyone.now i'm going to introduce my family to you.may my home is not the best,but i love my home.i love my parents and my cute little dog.
i think i live in a happy family.my parents are both keen on their job,while they never forget to love our home.my parents usually respect what i thought and what i want to do.they give me a very free space to grow.so here i live happiness.unfortunately,my grandparents have living in heaven for several years and i think there they also live very well.
this is my family,a happy harmonious home.i love it
good morning,everyone.now i'd like to introduce my family to you.Perhaps my home is not the best,but i still love it so much.i love my parents as well as my cute little dog.
i think i live in a happy family.my parents are both keen on their jobs,meanwhile they never forget to show their love to us.my parents usually respect what i think and what i want to do.they give me very free space in which i blossom(同样是表达成长,这个词会好点,happily.unfortunately,my grandparents have been living in heaven for several years and i think there they also live very well.
this is my family,a happy and harmonious one that i love with all my heart.
i think i live in a happy family.my parents are both keen on their jobs,meanwhile they never forget to show their love to us.my parents usually respect what i think and what i want to do.they give me very free space in which i blossom(同样是表达成长,这个词会好点,happily.unfortunately,my grandparents have been living in heaven for several years and i think there they also live very well.
this is my family,a happy and harmonious one that i love with all my heart.