求大神改下这篇高中英语作文【满分25分】能得几分?题目是大意是让你向经理投诉旅游遭遇.
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求大神改下这篇高中英语作文【满分25分】能得几分?题目是大意是让你向经理投诉旅游遭遇.
Dear manager
thanks for you reading this letter.My name is Lihua,a traveller of Beijing Branch China International Travel agency.
I meet many terrible things in this travel.All of the travel,many things went wrong.we didnot saw places of our promise and the guilder said I should to buy some neednot goods,if I want to leave there.I feel angry.
So,your campany should apologize to all the travellers in the public media,if you cannot do this.I will sue your company.
I am looking forward to your reply
yours
LiHua
Dear manager
thanks for you reading this letter.My name is Lihua,a traveller of Beijing Branch China International Travel agency.
I meet many terrible things in this travel.All of the travel,many things went wrong.we didnot saw places of our promise and the guilder said I should to buy some neednot goods,if I want to leave there.I feel angry.
So,your campany should apologize to all the travellers in the public media,if you cannot do this.I will sue your company.
I am looking forward to your reply
yours
LiHua
1.thanks for YOUR reading this letter.My name is Lihua,a traveller of Beijing Branch OF China International Travel agency.
2.too much terrible things happened in this journey made me feel unnomal.Should I leave there until my wallet become loose?it's ridiculous and also illegal,angthing else was mess-up,you totally forgot to meet our needs your agency had promised before.As a travel company,the more complaints your customer gave,the more undesirable consequences you would face.
3.I do believe a prominent executive would never neglect situation,and some improvements and action will be carried out sooner.this is where writing this note comes in.
楼主要加强英语学习啊,这些句子真得很挫.写出来会被那些懂英语的人鄙视的,囧rZ.
2.too much terrible things happened in this journey made me feel unnomal.Should I leave there until my wallet become loose?it's ridiculous and also illegal,angthing else was mess-up,you totally forgot to meet our needs your agency had promised before.As a travel company,the more complaints your customer gave,the more undesirable consequences you would face.
3.I do believe a prominent executive would never neglect situation,and some improvements and action will be carried out sooner.this is where writing this note comes in.
楼主要加强英语学习啊,这些句子真得很挫.写出来会被那些懂英语的人鄙视的,囧rZ.
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