请帮忙检查我写的英语作文是否有问题300多词China,my lovely home

请帮忙检查我写的英语作文是否有问题300多词China,my lovely home
3分钟左右的演讲.
Good morning,my friends.The name of my speech is ‘China,my lovely home’.
Here is one of the biggest and oldest countries in the world,China.China has vast land and amazing sight.
There are a lot of scenic spots and historical sites,such as the Great Wall,the Palace Museum,Changjiang River and so on.They are all very fabulous.Changjiang River is sixty-three hundred kilometres long,the the third-longest in the world,which is thought as one of the mother rivers in China.It’s the main waterway for China,so important to us that the places along it are known as ‘Land of Rice and Fish’.This is the most fertile region in China with the richest cities and villages.Among all the new developed scenes,I like Hainan Island the best,because it has long summer and no winter and fifty percent is covered by forests.People like to go there for winter vacations.Now they are building it as International Tourism Island.
To talk about the beautiful nature,we cannot forget our good friends—animals.The most famous one isthe nation’s treasure,panda.Pandas have white and black fur.They look so lovely that they usually make us a belly laugh .When you see them you can get happy soon .Another animal we all like is South China tiger.It’s also very rare.They are both among the first class national protected animals.
Besides animals,China also has a lot of specialities,especially foods.For all Chinese festivals,we celebrate with a special kind of food.At Spring Festival,people usually eat rice balls in the south and Jiaozi in the north.At Mid-Autumn Festival ,we often eat moon cakes.By the way,we also watch the moon,because the moon is big and bright on that day .Meanwhile,old people tell their grandchildren some stories about the moon.Now Chinese food is loved not only by we Chinese,but also by many foreign people.It breaks the ice between China and western countries.
This is my home ——China.I like it very much .I think ,be more familier with China ,people all over the world will like China more and more .

还不错吧,如果内容可以具体地说多点为什么你喜欢中国,为什么觉得是lovely就更好了.
（个人见解）另外还有一些比较明显的问题之处：
“Now they are building it as International Tourism Island.”
- building（建设）可以改为developing（发展
- as 之后加个 an 会好一点
“At Spring Festival, people usually eat rice balls in the south and Jiaozi in the north.”
- 饺子的英文是dumpling,不是jiaozi
“By the way, we also watch the moon, because the moon is big and bright on that day . Meanwhile, old people tell their grandchildren some stories about the moon.”
- 用不着by the way,直接we also 就行了
- watch the moon 不太对,watch是看,我们不是看月亮,是观赏月亮,所以可以说view and admire the moon.
- because 后面可以加个we think
- big and bright可以改成biggest and brightest
- old people tell 可以改成old people will tell
最后那里：
“This is my home ——China. I like it very much . I think , be more familier with China , people all over the world will like China more and more .”
- like可以改为love,跟你的题目相呼应
- 从I think开始有点不对
可以改为I think when China becomes more familiar to the world, people all over the world will begin to like China more and more.