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英语小作文帮忙检查下是否有错误.好的追加20分
Believe or doubt
The author met a stranger who said his money had been stolen. He hoped the author can help him. And the author gave him some money. But some author’s friends considered he is a fool also laughed at him.
As far as I’m concerned, what the author did does reasonable. It is universally acknowledged that help other people whom in trouble is a good behavior. But we really do this? I don’t think so. People often refuse help the others, resulting from the fact that they don’t believe the others whom said them were in trouble. There is no denying that we should doubt a stranger’s words. After all, isn’t everyone is virtuous. We, however, sometimes also were in trouble. And we only could ask a stranger for help. Maybe we all hoped the person whom we met would help us. So, if you are that stranger, you should consider whether you help them. Take me for example; I once met a couple with a baby on my way home. They said that their baby hadn’t eaten yet. They only hoped I can give some food to their baby, but don’t care themselves, which made me feel them didn’t talk a lie. So I bought some food to them and give some money for them. Even if they’re cheat, I don’t want the baby be hungry. “Do well and have well”, as the saying goes. I would rather hold the belief that most people are virtuous. Believe or doubt, what you will choose? From where I stand, I select to believe.
这篇作文是有个原文让我们看，然后第一段概述，第二段是自己对主题展开议论，第一段的the author就是原文中的作者。求精不求速。。。
Believe or doubt
The author met a stranger who said his money had been stolen. He hoped the author can help him. And the author gave him some money. But some author’s friends considered he is a fool also laughed at him.
As far as I’m concerned, what the author did does reasonable. It is universally acknowledged that help other people whom in trouble is a good behavior. But we really do this? I don’t think so. People often refuse help the others, resulting from the fact that they don’t believe the others whom said them were in trouble. There is no denying that we should doubt a stranger’s words. After all, isn’t everyone is virtuous. We, however, sometimes also were in trouble. And we only could ask a stranger for help. Maybe we all hoped the person whom we met would help us. So, if you are that stranger, you should consider whether you help them. Take me for example; I once met a couple with a baby on my way home. They said that their baby hadn’t eaten yet. They only hoped I can give some food to their baby, but don’t care themselves, which made me feel them didn’t talk a lie. So I bought some food to them and give some money for them. Even if they’re cheat, I don’t want the baby be hungry. “Do well and have well”, as the saying goes. I would rather hold the belief that most people are virtuous. Believe or doubt, what you will choose? From where I stand, I select to believe.
这篇作文是有个原文让我们看，然后第一段概述，第二段是自己对主题展开议论，第一段的the author就是原文中的作者。求精不求速。。。
It is universally acknowledged that help 【改成helping.(It是形式主语,真正主语是helping,这是个动名词)】other people whom in trouble is a good behavior
People often refuse help 【改成helping..(refuse doing sth)】the others,resulting from the fact that they don’t believe the others whom said them were in trouble.【感觉很杂糅,还是分开写吧】
Even if they’re cheat,I don’t want the baby be hungry.【拿过去的事做例子说理,这时你那时的想法,用过去式比较妥帖,were,didn't】
Believe or doubt,what you will choose?【把will放you前面,这what疑问句的句式啊】.
以上,个人看法.我也高三的.
People often refuse help 【改成helping..(refuse doing sth)】the others,resulting from the fact that they don’t believe the others whom said them were in trouble.【感觉很杂糅,还是分开写吧】
Even if they’re cheat,I don’t want the baby be hungry.【拿过去的事做例子说理,这时你那时的想法,用过去式比较妥帖,were,didn't】
Believe or doubt,what you will choose?【把will放you前面,这what疑问句的句式啊】.
以上,个人看法.我也高三的.