神马作文网谁来帮我改一下英语作文
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谁来帮我改一下英语作文
Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum of history,I saw a lot about history and the guide tell us about history'stories.I learn a lot.I took a lot of great photos.It was time to go.I bought some lovely gifts for my parent.The gifts are cheap.All in all,it was an exciting Children's Day.
Yesterday was Children's Day.I went on a school trip.We visited the museum of history.It was interesting.We went there by bus.On the bus,I talked with my classmate.Time goes quickly.I got to the museum.At the museum of history,I saw a lot about history and the guide tell us about history'stories.I learn a lot.I took a lot of great photos.It was time to go.I bought some lovely gifts for my parent.The gifts are cheap.All in all,it was an exciting Children's Day.
classmate 改为 classmates or a classmate.
tell 改成told
Learn 改成learned
parent 改成parents
再问： It was time to go 这句不用改吗 我想表达的是该走了
再答： 不用改，因为是过去式，时态是对的，表达也是对的。
tell 改成told
Learn 改成learned
parent 改成parents
再问： It was time to go 这句不用改吗 我想表达的是该走了
再答： 不用改，因为是过去式，时态是对的，表达也是对的。