神马作文网英语改错题,有六处错误.==ELF
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英语改错题,有六处错误.==ELF
About 70% of the parents bought computers for their children to study,but some for their children to study ,but some for thier work .The fact how students use the computers really surprises us.Only about 30% of them use computers find out useful informations.About 60% of them use computers to chat with other people on the Internet .What is worse ,60% used computers to play games and 20% use computers to see VCDs or listen to music.In my opinion ,we should make a better use of our computers.
About 70% of the parents bought computers for their children to study,but some for their children to study ,but some for thier work .The fact how students use the computers really surprises us.Only about 30% of them use computers find out useful informations.About 60% of them use computers to chat with other people on the Internet .What is worse ,60% used computers to play games and 20% use computers to see VCDs or listen to music.In my opinion ,we should make a better use of our computers.
短文第一句话写得太拗口了.bought改为buy,因为这段文章都用的是一般现在时.
第二行 but some for thier work中的but去掉,thier拼写错误,应为their,不过这边可能是你打错了.
The fact how students...中fact后面加that,这是固定表达方式,the fact that+从句
第三行 only about 30% of them use computers find out useful informations.中find out前面加to,因为use sth.to do sth.,informations的s去掉,因为information指信息,是不可数名词
第五行 60% used computers...中used去掉d,这里用的是一般时态,不需要过去时
第二行 but some for thier work中的but去掉,thier拼写错误,应为their,不过这边可能是你打错了.
The fact how students...中fact后面加that,这是固定表达方式,the fact that+从句
第三行 only about 30% of them use computers find out useful informations.中find out前面加to,因为use sth.to do sth.,informations的s去掉,因为information指信息,是不可数名词
第五行 60% used computers...中used去掉d,这里用的是一般时态,不需要过去时