神马作文网英语短文改错题.10处错误.
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英语短文改错题.10处错误.
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I hope everyone can give hand when someone else is in need.
Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happening.I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I hope everyone can give hand when someone else is in need.
1.as usual 2.while-when 3.hear-heard 4.shocking-shocked 5.i had pushed 中had去掉 6.but -and 7.carried-carry 8.to his great relief-my 9.proud of what 10.give a hand