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帮忙看一下这段作文开头有没有语法错误?是否会跑题,谢谢!
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, using the internet to communicate with each other are gaining increasing popularity. Even two people are sitting closely, they prefer to using internet than face to face to communicating. Below the picture lies acaption which reads: the internet’s near or far. It is obvious that internet’s benefit or costs has become a talk of this information society.
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As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, using the internet to communicate with each other is(are改成了is) gaining increasingly popularity. Even when(这里加了一个when) two people are sitting closely, they prefer to use internet rather than communicate face to face(这句改动稍大一些).Below the picture lies a caption which reads,”The internet’s near or far.” It is obvious that the benefits and costs of internet(此句也作了修改) have become a talk of this information society.
As is subtly portrayed in the cartoon, using the internet to communicate with each other is(are改成了is) gaining increasingly popularity. Even when(这里加了一个when) two people are sitting closely, they prefer to use internet rather than communicate face to face(这句改动稍大一些).Below the picture lies a caption which reads,”The internet’s near or far.” It is obvious that the benefits and costs of internet(此句也作了修改) have become a talk of this information society.