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How time flies!In the pass year ,I've changed three jobs ,though had some unpleasure matters ,another matters I think was well on the whole.
Work after one year ago,no matter on work or on the person relationship,I feel I become more and more mature,but I always feel that the konwledge not very enough,so that I very worried on these.
The next year ,I plan to change a new job ,I know find a job not easy now,but I still want to try it ,I like about administration work,I hope I can find it
How time flies!In the pass year ,I've changed three jobs ,though had some unpleasure matters ,another matters I think was well on the whole.
Work after one year ago,no matter on work or on the person relationship,I feel I become more and more mature,but I always feel that the konwledge not very enough,so that I very worried on these.
The next year ,I plan to change a new job ,I know find a job not easy now,but I still want to try it ,I like about administration work,I hope I can find it
pass意思是通过,在过去的一年可以这么说in the last year.
换工作,一般用quit,所以是i've quitted three jobs.
person relationship两个名词不能放一起,前面的要用形容词.
其他的请参考下面修改后的文章
how time flies!in the last year,i've quitted three jobs in all.although i had some unpleasant matters,i think it's not bad anyway.
after these three jobs i find myself more mature in dealing with my work or personal relationships with others.but i think there are many things i don't know,that means my knowledge isn't enough,so that i feel so worried.
in the coming year,i decide to make my way to find a new job,i know it is not a easy thing now,but i will try my best.i want to get a job about executive management,i hope i can find it .
换工作,一般用quit,所以是i've quitted three jobs.
person relationship两个名词不能放一起,前面的要用形容词.
其他的请参考下面修改后的文章
how time flies!in the last year,i've quitted three jobs in all.although i had some unpleasant matters,i think it's not bad anyway.
after these three jobs i find myself more mature in dealing with my work or personal relationships with others.but i think there are many things i don't know,that means my knowledge isn't enough,so that i feel so worried.
in the coming year,i decide to make my way to find a new job,i know it is not a easy thing now,but i will try my best.i want to get a job about executive management,i hope i can find it .