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Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.then I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and close the door.next first class.Mis li called me for answer the question,but I didnot know the question.so teacher punished me to cleaned the classroom.I felt this was a trouble day.
Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.then I forgot to ta
“next first class”“next”的“n”大写;“ Mis li ”写错了,应该是“Miss”;把”then“改为"but";"colse"改为“closed”【过去式】;“called me for answer”改为“asked me to answer”;“know the question.”你应该是想说不知道问题的答案吧?把“quesion”改为“answer”;我认为把“ punished me to ”改为“let me to ”更好一些.还有,“felt”改为”fell“;再把“trouble”改为“terrible”更恰当呢~
所以文章变成这样:
Yesterday,It was sunny ,I went to school.but I forgot to take key.I came back to home angin.I took my key and closed the door.first class.Miss li asked me to answer the question,but I didnot know the answer.so teacher let me to cleaned the classroom.I felt this was a terrible day.
建议而已,不是很好……