神马作文网请帮忙修改一下一短篇英语对话
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请帮忙修改一下一短篇英语对话
(Any similarity to any persons, living or dead, or to any actual events is conincidental and unintentional)
Carina: Hey, Tiffany, why the wrong face?
Tiffany: Don't know.I just came back from school, maybe someone makes me angry in here.
C: Come on, tell me what happen.
T: Ummmm...do ya know Jack?
C: None, whom?
T: Geek, a really geek. Whom always grabs himself on the class. I’m not a pouty.Cuz angry makes me ageing easily. But he really make me almost blew my top. If someone brags his 3 mouths New England travel every day, just like a fly surround you. Will you angry? While he said, “When I was in New England...","Compare with New England..."I really want to give him a shot and shout to him, “Shut the fuck up!Jackass!I'll see you in hell first! You SOB!"
C: Stay calm! You should maintain rational now.
T: Don’t worry. I will not do stupid.
C: BTW, why you not get away from him?
T:Cuz he is my Clinical Medicine teacher.
C:Um…that bad.
T: Right, Kan you imagine what the fucking hell like?
C: Okay,Let bygones be bygones. Water under the bridge carried your pain. You need some rest. Do ya want to take some meal with me tomarro at La Dolce Vita?
T: Right, shall we go Dutch?
C: No, I’ll pay it.
请帮忙查看一下是否有语法错误或者用词不当,最好能修改一下不通顺的地方,如果能润色一下更好……
(Any similarity to any persons, living or dead, or to any actual events is conincidental and unintentional)
Carina: Hey, Tiffany, why the wrong face?
Tiffany: Don't know.I just came back from school, maybe someone makes me angry in here.
C: Come on, tell me what happen.
T: Ummmm...do ya know Jack?
C: None, whom?
T: Geek, a really geek. Whom always grabs himself on the class. I’m not a pouty.Cuz angry makes me ageing easily. But he really make me almost blew my top. If someone brags his 3 mouths New England travel every day, just like a fly surround you. Will you angry? While he said, “When I was in New England...","Compare with New England..."I really want to give him a shot and shout to him, “Shut the fuck up!Jackass!I'll see you in hell first! You SOB!"
C: Stay calm! You should maintain rational now.
T: Don’t worry. I will not do stupid.
C: BTW, why you not get away from him?
T:Cuz he is my Clinical Medicine teacher.
C:Um…that bad.
T: Right, Kan you imagine what the fucking hell like?
C: Okay,Let bygones be bygones. Water under the bridge carried your pain. You need some rest. Do ya want to take some meal with me tomarro at La Dolce Vita?
T: Right, shall we go Dutch?
C: No, I’ll pay it.
请帮忙查看一下是否有语法错误或者用词不当,最好能修改一下不通顺的地方,如果能润色一下更好……
wrong face不好
in here语法错误
do ya know Jack?ya不是这么用的,可以直接you know jack?
C:None,whom? 为什么是None,为什么用宾格?
T:Geek,a really.这段：
Cuz angry makes me ageing easily.完全Chinglish,去掉
Will you angry?谓语呢?
really want to give him a shot and shout to him,“Shut the fuck up!Jackass!I'll see you in hell first!You SOB!"
你真要用F***?如果是粗俗的对话,这篇文章完全不是这样写,比如第一句why the wrong face可以改成you look pissed.或who shit on your face所以建议去掉这句,写点其他的.后面一样,不要用F Word.
in here语法错误
do ya know Jack?ya不是这么用的,可以直接you know jack?
C:None,whom? 为什么是None,为什么用宾格?
T:Geek,a really.这段：
Cuz angry makes me ageing easily.完全Chinglish,去掉
Will you angry?谓语呢?
really want to give him a shot and shout to him,“Shut the fuck up!Jackass!I'll see you in hell first!You SOB!"
你真要用F***?如果是粗俗的对话,这篇文章完全不是这样写,比如第一句why the wrong face可以改成you look pissed.或who shit on your face所以建议去掉这句,写点其他的.后面一样,不要用F Word.