请英语好的朋友帮我检查一下我自己写的PERSONAL STATEMENT.在此先表示感谢.

请英语好的朋友帮我检查一下我自己写的PERSONAL STATEMENT.在此先表示感谢.
如果文章用词过于简单或者错误,请麻烦纠正过来,
PERSONAL STATEMENT
To study aboard is a dream of mine.Nowadays,the world is becoming a globalization system.Therefore speaking English is essential things no matter now or future to communicate with people who living in this world.
When I was twelve years old,I came to Japan with my parent.Before that,I know nothing about Japan at first.However the time is passing by,I am used to staying in Japan and I have been through a different culture.I have got a great deal of experiences from each country.Then I thought that I want to be a more useful man who can speak English very well too.No matter how difficult to me,I will never give up and I need this opportunity to make my English skills be better.
Recently,many Japanese companies have been highly regarded with English talent.It goes without saying that study aboard is great experience to attain a good job.I will do my best to learn English and I believe my English skills can make a big progress during in the UK study days.It gives me the ability to face the future and I will never waste it.
Actually,I got the information about East Anglia from my English professor CHIMORI.My teacher told me a vest number of advice to study English.In addition,professor CHIMORI had been to the University of East Anglia when she was a student.So I have reason to trust this school is a good choice because my teacher speaks English wonderful.Moreover,I found that the University of East Anglia is one of famous college in the UK.Therefore I eager to study at here and I believe this year will be a meaningful time for my life.
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1."to study aboard is a dream of mine."= I am always looking forward to studying aboard.
2."the world is becoming a globalization system"= the world is going to be a global system sooner or later
3."Therefore speaking English is essential things no matter now or future to communicate with people who living in this world." =Therefore,english is becoming increasingly important now.
4."people who living in this world"= people all over the world
5.去掉 at first
6."that I want to be a more useful man who can speak English very well too"= I desire to be a better person who speaks english fluently.
7." No matter how difficult to me,I will never give up and I need this opportunity to make my English skills be better."= No matter how challenging it is ,I will strive to do my best and seize the opportunity as well.
8."study aboard is great experience to attain a good job."= studying aboard is a great experience to earn a position in the future
9."I will do my best to learn English and I believe my English skills can make a big progress during in the UK study days.It gives me the ability to face the future and I will never waste it."= I believe that I will get more progress after the treasure learning period in UK.I really appreciate the chance to see and explore the world myself.
10."a vest number of advice to study English",是vast,=a lot of suggestion about how to learn english effectively
11"So I have reason to trust this school is a good choice because my teacher speaks English wonderful"=So I have no doubt that this school is my best choice since my teacher speaks perfect english
12."one of famous college"= one of the most famous colleges
13."Therefore I eager to study at here and I believe this year will be a meaningful time for my life." In a word,I can not wait for the life here,which could definitely be an unforgotten time in my life
姐姐,你的英文哪里学的?
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