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请英语好的同志帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
The summer vacation has come to a close. School started yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I usually surfed the internet and did my homework.On weekends,I ofen went swimming with my mom.I played badminton with my dad once a week.In July, my friends and I went to the movie therter to watch . We think it was very funny and exciting. In short,I think I had a great and relaxing summer vacation.
The summer vacation has come to a close. School started yesterday. But I still love my summer vacation.During the summer vacation,I usually surfed the internet and did my homework.On weekends,I ofen went swimming with my mom.I played badminton with my dad once a week.In July, my friends and I went to the movie therter to watch . We think it was very funny and exciting. In short,I think I had a great and relaxing summer vacation.
come to an end比较好
i often,不是 i ofen
挺好的,注意细节
i often,不是 i ofen
挺好的,注意细节