英文语法修改请帮我修改下以下2段的语法,能改多少就该多少Teachers often play a significan

英文语法修改
请帮我修改下以下2段的语法,能改多少就该多少
Teachers often play a significant role in the field of education.Their interaction with the students directly influences the children’s attempt to learn as well as their future prospects.There are many components that make up of an ideal education; however,the best way to strength students’ learning is to provide students with flexible and democratic learning environment.It is important for the teachers to maintain high expectation for student achievement,develop class learning materials that can be relate to the real-world,enhance students’ curiosity and joy of learning through educational activities as well as provide emotional and academic support for the students.
It is important for the schools and the teachers to persistently believe that all children can learn if they were taught in proper way.They should understand the fact that the strengths and skills of every student varies; some students may understand certain concepts faster than others.Therefore,they have the responsibility to encourage students in exploring useful learning methods that’s suitable for themselves and set up reasonable expectations for all of the students.The poem “Graded Paper” shows an example of a teacher who tries to correct all the mistakes in the student’s essay and edits the essay in his own style of writing.As the author,Mark Halliday,states:“you are not/me,finally,/and though this is an awkward problem,involving/the inescapable fact that you are so young,so young/ it is also a delightful provocation” (Halliday,handout).This is the point when the teacher suddenly realizes that he should give the student opportunity to explore learning in his own way.He recognizes that the student is still young and he ought not to compare himself with the student.He gives the student a good grade as a way to show his encouragement for the student in maintaining his own writing approach.The teacher has made the right decision by providing helpful feedback to the student rather than force the student to demonstrate a writing style like his.Overall,teachers should have positive expectations toward students that motivate them to fulfill their potentials.

Teachers often play a significant role in education.The interaction between teachers and students directly influences the learning attempt as well as the future prospects of children .
A successful education is made up of many components ; however,the best way is to provide students with flexible and democratic learning environment.It is important for the teachers to maintain high expectation for student's achievement,develop class learning materials that can be related to the real-world,enhance students’ curiosity and joy of learning through educational activities as well as provide emotional and academic support for the students.
It is important for the schools and the teachers to persistently believe that all children can learn if they were taught in proper way.They should understand the fact that the strength and skills of every student varies; some students may understand certain concepts faster than others.Therefore,they have the responsibility to encourage students in exploring useful learning methods that’s suitable for themselves and set up reasonable expectations for all of the students.The poem “Graded Paper” shows an example of a teacher who tries to correct all the mistakes in the student’s essay and edits the essay in his own style of writing.As the author,Mark Halliday,states:“you are not/me,finally,/and though this is an awkward problem,involving/the inescapable fact that you are so young,so young/ it is also a delightful provocation” (Halliday,handout).This is the point when the teacher suddenly realizes that he should give the student opportunity to explore learning in his own way.
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