英语作文 5句话的那种,麻烦帮我看看有什么错误的地方!

英语作文 5句话的那种,麻烦帮我看看有什么错误的地方!

!In our dialy life,some friends and neighbors whom we get along well with make us amused.They are concerned about us and we often talk face to face and help each other.Maybe we are fond of making friends because of it ,but sometimes we do not understand entirely how to do it.In order to take part in different activities ,we choose different friends as our partners.We may have many friends ,but there is only a best friend who can share our sufferings and even go through together in our lifes.We should help them entirely in our power because the best friend may be someone whom we fall in love with.满意答案Floccinaucin12级2010-08-29改过之后的：In our daily life,some friends and neighbors who we get along well with make us amused.They are concerned about us and we often talk face to face and help each other.Maybe we are fond of making friends because of it ,but sometimes we do not understand entirely what to do with it.(这个才是处理的意思)In order to take part in different activities ,we choose different friends as our partners.We may have many friends ,but there is only one best friend who can share our sufferings with and even go through together in our lifes with.We should help them entirely in our power because the best friend may be someone who we fall in love with.你上初几啊,怎么文章写得那么没水平啊,反正我只能给你改出几处明显点的错误 追问：其实不是处理的意思,是怎样不知道怎样去交朋友的意思,我本想用do it 代替交朋友这件事的.如果只这个意思可以吗?but there is only one best friend who can share our sufferings with and even go through together in our lifes with.这里with后的人是不是可以省略啊?那可不可以but there is only one best friend whom we can share our sufferings with and even go through together in our lifes with 这作文几乎是直译过来的,真的很没水准吗?回答：你这篇文章除了缺少句子成分外就是表达的极其汉语化,就跟按汉语一个一个翻译似的.我给你改的都是些最基本的语法错误,如果你有些英语功底就不应该出现这样的错误.然后就是这篇作文一看就是个刚学英语没多久的人写的.追问：考试中的5句作文,有时内容较多,一般我都差不多直译,汉语化的确是个问题.可不可以帮我重新写一篇,下面是中文,写成5句作文,在日常生活中,与我们相处融洽的朋友和邻居使我们更加愉快2.他们关心和帮助我们,我们经常面对面的和他们交谈3.我们喜欢交很多朋友,但我们可能不完全懂得交朋友的方式4.为了参加不同的活动,我们选择不同的朋友作为我们的搭档5.我们可能有很多朋友,但最好的朋友可能只有一个,他/她能够分享我们的经历与甘苦,甚至与我们一起度过难关6.我们最好的朋友可能就是我们彼此相爱的人7.我们也应该全力以赴的帮助最好的朋友 回答：不行,没那个心思.