神马作文网英语小作文求润色修改~谢谢了
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英语小作文求润色修改~谢谢了
Of course, I will never forget my friends and my teachers.
However, If I must choose one to recall, I will choose a meaningful social experience.
During one week, our class visited Home for the Aged which is the first time for us to know old people and their life. We all touched by their hope of life and an active attitude about life.
We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs for them, which makes them really happy and content. For a owner of this society, I think each of us is the master of society, need to contribute to a force, which will make the society more warmth. If our force accumulate, then it must be a flame, which light shines in everyone's hearts.
This experience allow us to touch this socity, from which we know the feelings of love, kindness and the meaning of life.
Of course, I will never forget my friends and my teachers.
However, If I must choose one to recall, I will choose a meaningful social experience.
During one week, our class visited Home for the Aged which is the first time for us to know old people and their life. We all touched by their hope of life and an active attitude about life.
We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs for them, which makes them really happy and content. For a owner of this society, I think each of us is the master of society, need to contribute to a force, which will make the society more warmth. If our force accumulate, then it must be a flame, which light shines in everyone's hearts.
This experience allow us to touch this socity, from which we know the feelings of love, kindness and the meaning of life.
Of course,I will never forget my friends and my teachers.
However,If I must choose one to recall,I will choose a meaningful event.
One day,our class visited Home for the Aged.For us,which is the first time to know the life of old people.We all touched by their hope of life and thier active attitude toword the life.
We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs for them,which made them really happy and content.As a part of this society,I think each of us is the master of society,we all should have the sense of responsibility,then the world will be more beutiful.If our strength can be gathered,it will become a strong force,which will be like a light shining in everyone's hearts.
Touching this socity,we know the feelings of love,kindness and the meaning of life.
However,If I must choose one to recall,I will choose a meaningful event.
One day,our class visited Home for the Aged.For us,which is the first time to know the life of old people.We all touched by their hope of life and thier active attitude toword the life.
We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs for them,which made them really happy and content.As a part of this society,I think each of us is the master of society,we all should have the sense of responsibility,then the world will be more beutiful.If our strength can be gathered,it will become a strong force,which will be like a light shining in everyone's hearts.
Touching this socity,we know the feelings of love,kindness and the meaning of life.