关于雅思大作文同不同意 social skills 和good qualification一样重要对于success i

关于雅思大作文
同不同意 social skills 和good qualification一样重要对于success in job,请问论点都有什么啊 最好有三个

这是2012年一月份的考题
下面观点供你参考：
good qualification
　　proof of capacity --> eligible for a duty --c-- difficult
　　social skills
　　effective communication --> efficiency --if-- tolerated
参考范文
Introduction
　　In such a competitive society where achieving success in a job is increasingly significant that people attach substantial importance to their academic qualification.But I tend to believe that success in a job requires not only academic qualification but also social skills.
　　Body
　　Qualification is proof of capacity,knowledge or skill that an employer possesses for a job.It is a widely held perception that with good qualification,an employer is more likely to be believed eligible for a duty,whereas a reasonable qualification does not necessarily indicate competence which is basically fostered through the practice in a job.By contrast,it seems difficult to judge whether a person without a reasonable qualification could fullfil a mission.Therefore,when employers recruiting new members,candidates with fine qualification normally win more favor in comparison with their fellow competitors.
　　Social skills often refer to an array of skills that facilitate people to communicate,relate and socialize with others.It is such a host of social skills that could probably help enhance employers’ working efficiency,particularly in corporations such as New Oriental Education & Technology Group Inc.where thousands of people are currently employed and effective communication is highly demanded.If employees are lack of such social skills as to speak inappropriately to a situation,there is a higher possibility for them to spoil business,thereby being dismissed.
　　Conclusion
　　Taking all factors into account,I tend to reaffirm my position that social skills are no less important than reasonable qualification for success in job and they should be considered equally significant by employers.
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再问： 原来这是12年的真题啊 我6月7号考 网上看到预测有一个是这道题 不太会写 太感谢你了