神马作文网帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文 要求：没有语病,有分的哦
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帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文 要求：没有语病,有分的哦
I went to guangzhou to visit my uncle and aunt.We played happily there.
The first day,we got to the airport of(这里应该用of还是in)Zhengzhou and flew to guang
zhou.Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there.
The second day,we visited my uncle andzhu jiang.The scene of zhu jiang is very beautiful.
The third day,we went to shenzhen by power car.We visited The window of the world.
there are many interesting places of different countries.we are happy in it.
finally,we wentshopping.my mum bought(应该用现完还是过去）four bags.mysister bought(同上）a trolley case.I bought nothing because they not fit in me(语法对?）
this travel tell me:the world is very big!
还有“祝奶奶健康长寿永远年轻漂亮”怎么说?
寿星
尽快
我着急用
I went to guangzhou to visit my uncle and aunt.We played happily there.
The first day,we got to the airport of(这里应该用of还是in)Zhengzhou and flew to guang
zhou.Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there.
The second day,we visited my uncle andzhu jiang.The scene of zhu jiang is very beautiful.
The third day,we went to shenzhen by power car.We visited The window of the world.
there are many interesting places of different countries.we are happy in it.
finally,we wentshopping.my mum bought(应该用现完还是过去）four bags.mysister bought(同上）a trolley case.I bought nothing because they not fit in me(语法对?）
this travel tell me:the world is very big!
还有“祝奶奶健康长寿永远年轻漂亮”怎么说?
寿星
尽快
我着急用
We played happily there.；we had a great time.更好2,用of 3.Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there.改成（
then it was land,we found a hotel to rest)4,用过去,与前一句一致5,语法对6.this travel tell me该为this travel tell to me( tell to sb)7"I wish grandma will be longevity and health forever ,young and beautiful forever"
再问： 这个then it was land是什么意思？
再答： ）我的失误，应该是then it was landing, we found a hotel to rest(then it was land, we found a hotel to rest)不好意思。不知道我对（Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there）的理解对不对，如果不对，请见谅。
再问： 没有tell to sb只有tell sb
再答： 我知道昨天就想和你说，我很抱歉，我记错了，真是不好意思。为我的失误真的很抱歉。#^_^#
then it was land,we found a hotel to rest)4,用过去,与前一句一致5,语法对6.this travel tell me该为this travel tell to me( tell to sb)7"I wish grandma will be longevity and health forever ,young and beautiful forever"
再问： 这个then it was land是什么意思？
再答： ）我的失误，应该是then it was landing, we found a hotel to rest(then it was land, we found a hotel to rest)不好意思。不知道我对（Then it was dark.We found a hotel and sleeped there）的理解对不对，如果不对，请见谅。
再问： 没有tell to sb只有tell sb
再答： 我知道昨天就想和你说，我很抱歉，我记错了，真是不好意思。为我的失误真的很抱歉。#^_^#
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