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急>大家帮我看看,这句话有没有语病,有的话顺便修改一下~
Canada is vast in territory,northern side amounts to 83 N,south side for 41 N,therefore each place climate difference is very big.The Canadian first big city Toronto's climate is similar with Beijing,but the winter is longer also the multi- snows,summer does not have the intense summer heat.The Canadian majority of areas sunlight is generally speaking abundant,the four seasons are distinct,pleasant weather.
Canada is vast in territory,northern side amounts to 83 N,south side for 41 N,therefore each place climate difference is very big.The Canadian first big city Toronto's climate is similar with Beijing,but the winter is longer also the multi- snows,summer does not have the intense summer heat.The Canadian majority of areas sunlight is generally speaking abundant,the four seasons are distinct,pleasant weather.
south side for 41 N----southen side to 41 N;
each place climate difference----the climate difference of each place;
first big----biggest;
also the multi- snows----and it snows heavily;
summer does not have the intense summer heat----另起一句：It is not that hot in summer.;
The Canadian majority of areas sunlight is generally speaking abundant, the four seasons are distinct, pleasant weather.----Generally speaking, most areas of Canada have plenty of sunlight, and the weather in four seasons are different but the same pleasant.
以上是个人意见,你看看能否采纳.^-^
each place climate difference----the climate difference of each place;
first big----biggest;
also the multi- snows----and it snows heavily;
summer does not have the intense summer heat----另起一句：It is not that hot in summer.;
The Canadian majority of areas sunlight is generally speaking abundant, the four seasons are distinct, pleasant weather.----Generally speaking, most areas of Canada have plenty of sunlight, and the weather in four seasons are different but the same pleasant.
以上是个人意见,你看看能否采纳.^-^