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Let me tell you my first unhappy experience.My first visit the cinema was a very unhappy one.I was taken there by some friend when I was seven years old.Entering into the cinema,I saw bright lights and the soft music sounded quite pleased.I felt afraid with the lights went off.Then the film started and I saw the train on the screen.The train was coming towards me.I got very frightened and that I got down under my seat.When my friend saw me ,they start to laugh.I felt ashamed and sat back in their seat.I didn't like the film and I stuck it out.I was glad when the film ended.
英语改错,Let me tell you my first unhappy experience.My first vi
Let me tell you my first unhappy experience.My first visit [to] the cinema was a very unhappy one.I was taken there by some friend[s] when I was seven years old.[After]Entering into the cinema,I saw bright lights and the soft music [making] quite pleased.I felt afraid [when] the lights off.Then the film started and I saw [a] train on the screen.The train was coming towards me.I got very frightened and that I got down under my seat.When my friend saw me ,they start[ed] to laugh.I felt ashamed and sat back in their seat[s].I didn't like the film and I stuck it out.I was glad when the film ended.总体还是不错的,加油.