短文改错.下 短文改错.     下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方

短文改错.下

短文改错.      下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.      增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在该句下面写出该加的词.      删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.      修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.      注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；                  2． 只允许修改10处,多者（从11处起）不计分.

Whenever I hear the song "My desk mates", I can't help thinking of Tom, who is my desk mate for  nearly two years. A disabled boy as he was, he always turned out the top student in every test. It was  such great efforts that were made despite all the difficulty in the school year that contributed to his  success. Meanwhile, what I want to emphasis is that, as a monitor, he was very responsible for his  work. I still remember that our head teacher went to hospital because of a severely headache one day  and left him in the charge of the whole class. To my surprise, he looked like a head teacher exactly, and  made the class in perfect order! I really looked up to him. Now, although we are in different schools, we  still keep touch with each other, discussing the problems in studies and share our happiness and sorrow.  I'do hope he does well in his study and makes progress every day! _______________________________________________________________________________

Whenever I hear the song "My desk mates",I can't help thinking of Tom,who is my desk
                                                                                                                    1.was
mate for nearly two years. A disabled boy as he was,he always turned out the top student in every
                                      2.去掉
test.It was such great efforts that were made despite all the difficulty in the school year that
                                           3. as                                     4. difficulties
contributed to his success. Meanwhile ,what I want to emphasis is that,as a monitor,he was very
                                          5. However                    6. emphasize
responsible for his work.I still remember that our head teacher went to hospital because of a
severely headache one day and left him in the charge of the whole class.To my surprise,he looked
7.severe                                              8.去掉
like a head teacher exactly,and made the class in perfect order!I really looked up to him.Now,
although we are in different schools,we still keep∧touch with each other,discussing the problems
                                                                       9  .in
in studies and share our happiness and sorrow.I do hope he does well in his study and makes
                  10. sharing
progress every day!