神马作文网帮忙修改一首英文小诗,
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帮忙修改一首英文小诗,
要求 能是这首诗通顺,每句之间有联系,押韵.
小诗 If I can fly,
If you love sky,
Maybe we can try,
Try to fly in the sky,
Look at that guy,
He's nice and shy,
It's raining and he begins to cry.
I know that's why,
Because he can‘t play
Also I should say goodbye
要求 能是这首诗通顺,每句之间有联系,押韵.
小诗 If I can fly,
If you love sky,
Maybe we can try,
Try to fly in the sky,
Look at that guy,
He's nice and shy,
It's raining and he begins to cry.
I know that's why,
Because he can‘t play
Also I should say goodbye
If I can fly,
I will fly up high to the sky.
If you also love the sky,
Let's try to fly in the sky.
Look at that guy,
He's nice and shy,
It's raining and he begins to cry.
I know that's why,
Because he can't see the sunshine,
Let's fly up so high,
Stop the rain and make the stars shine.
Time is late,
Also I should say goodbye.
再问： 老师说“look at that guy”后面的和前面的是两部分。。。就是，大概就是这句话突入了。可不可以改的通顺，有联系一点？
I will fly up high to the sky.
If you also love the sky,
Let's try to fly in the sky.
Look at that guy,
He's nice and shy,
It's raining and he begins to cry.
I know that's why,
Because he can't see the sunshine,
Let's fly up so high,
Stop the rain and make the stars shine.
Time is late,
Also I should say goodbye.
再问： 老师说“look at that guy”后面的和前面的是两部分。。。就是，大概就是这句话突入了。可不可以改的通顺，有联系一点？