神马作文网请帮我修正三篇英语作文,
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请帮我修正三篇英语作文,
就是这三篇,我用有道翻译之后又调整了下,但是水平有限,
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Real classic film is not fast food culture,it can reflect the social reality,human nature and the value of life,can impress people's heart,touches the soul of the people,cause people infinite thinking and memory.
The shawshank redemption is a film like this,although there is no Oscar,but fans think,it is really the uncrowned king.This film is a story of hope,bankers "Andy" after wrongfully convicted in prison,with his perseverance,sincerity and wisdom won everyone's respect,and in the years after the successful escape.At the end of the film,Andy andrhett reunion scene at the beach,had long been a fan heart the eternal classic.
In the past ten years,I often remember the movie.Young friends should see this movie,feeling tenacity andpersistence .Let us remember Andy's that sentence:...Hope is a good thing,maybe the best of things,and hope there is always hope...Since you have come here,just go further...
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A recent experience,for me,is absolutely unforgettable accident.In May 7th this year,I studied at Jilin Agricultural University,Professor Jim is our teacher,he is very strict.If you don't go to class,no exam scores.In order to avoid failure,I can very early to go to the classroom,make notes carefully.Of course,Professor Jim's lecture is very good,very attractive.
1 hours later,Professor Jim began to call the roll.I am very happy,in accordance with past practice,this means that I will be eligible to take the examination.That is to say,I do not have to attend a lecture,can now return to the bedroom to sleep.
2 hours later,I was awakened by the phone,the phone is my classmate."The fat man,where you go,why don't you answer the phone,1 hours after you left began to test.You may need to make-up!"This gave me a profound lesson:do anything,it must be serious,serious.
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All roads lead to Rome,the road to success has many kinds,we don't have to rigidly adhere to choose which way.The most important thing is to pay,even if God give you the opportunity of 5000000 yuan award,that also need to spend 2 yuan to buy lottery tickets.
I think,success = the correct direction + effort + a little bit of luck.If look for the direction,left,is the sweat and hard,with their own efforts to wait for the arrival of success.Some people may say,my direction is no problem,I have been working hard,I have not succeeded and why?There are many reasons.One,you're sure you in the right direction?Profound reflection of ourselves.Two,are you sure you hard enough?Have a look "The Shawshank Redemption",people use half a lifetime experience to escape,you do.Three,if the above two are no problem,then,you might really be lacking a bit of luck.It will continue to adhere to it,believe,success is not far away from you.
就是这三篇,我用有道翻译之后又调整了下,但是水平有限,
1
Real classic film is not fast food culture,it can reflect the social reality,human nature and the value of life,can impress people's heart,touches the soul of the people,cause people infinite thinking and memory.
The shawshank redemption is a film like this,although there is no Oscar,but fans think,it is really the uncrowned king.This film is a story of hope,bankers "Andy" after wrongfully convicted in prison,with his perseverance,sincerity and wisdom won everyone's respect,and in the years after the successful escape.At the end of the film,Andy andrhett reunion scene at the beach,had long been a fan heart the eternal classic.
In the past ten years,I often remember the movie.Young friends should see this movie,feeling tenacity andpersistence .Let us remember Andy's that sentence:...Hope is a good thing,maybe the best of things,and hope there is always hope...Since you have come here,just go further...
2
A recent experience,for me,is absolutely unforgettable accident.In May 7th this year,I studied at Jilin Agricultural University,Professor Jim is our teacher,he is very strict.If you don't go to class,no exam scores.In order to avoid failure,I can very early to go to the classroom,make notes carefully.Of course,Professor Jim's lecture is very good,very attractive.
1 hours later,Professor Jim began to call the roll.I am very happy,in accordance with past practice,this means that I will be eligible to take the examination.That is to say,I do not have to attend a lecture,can now return to the bedroom to sleep.
2 hours later,I was awakened by the phone,the phone is my classmate."The fat man,where you go,why don't you answer the phone,1 hours after you left began to test.You may need to make-up!"This gave me a profound lesson:do anything,it must be serious,serious.
3
All roads lead to Rome,the road to success has many kinds,we don't have to rigidly adhere to choose which way.The most important thing is to pay,even if God give you the opportunity of 5000000 yuan award,that also need to spend 2 yuan to buy lottery tickets.
I think,success = the correct direction + effort + a little bit of luck.If look for the direction,left,is the sweat and hard,with their own efforts to wait for the arrival of success.Some people may say,my direction is no problem,I have been working hard,I have not succeeded and why?There are many reasons.One,you're sure you in the right direction?Profound reflection of ourselves.Two,are you sure you hard enough?Have a look "The Shawshank Redemption",people use half a lifetime experience to escape,you do.Three,if the above two are no problem,then,you might really be lacking a bit of luck.It will continue to adhere to it,believe,success is not far away from you.
Different from the fast food films, those real classic films reflect social reality, human
nature, and the value of life. And leaves audiances profound impressions that might be cherished deep into the their heart, their soul,and their memory.
The shawshank redemption is exactly such a real classic film like this. Although this film didn't win the Award of Academy in the year when it was nominated, no one would ever deny the very truth that this film was so impressive that deserves the evaluation: uncrowned king.
The shawshank redemption tells a story about hope.The banker, Andy has been thrown
into the jail,for the wrong judgement made by the court. Even throgh, to him it was an unjust treatment, Andy didn't lose his perseverance, sincerity and wisdom,and won respect from most of his jailmates.At the end of the film, after year when Andy's prison break finanlly end up with a completely success, bring him back to ther freedom; when Andy and Rheet once again, meet each other at the beach, facing each other with a sincere smell, this moving senario is also to be cherished, long in people's mamory, and shall finally become classic.
额~ 不知道我的思路楼主受不受用~ 工程太大了~ 要是这样写觉得太挫了就算了~ 先小搞了一下第一篇.水平有限.
再问： 哪有啊，非常棒的昂，谢谢啦，能否继续下。不用太复杂，我考试作文用的，呵呵。
再答： 楼主喜欢就好~ 话说吃完饭我再努力一下吧~~
再问： 太帅了，谢谢,咱能不能速度下,我着急用,一会儿就得打印出来.不用太复杂,语法和拼写上没啥大问题就行昂.
再答： 我这6点已经在吃晚饭了~ 马上我来研究下一篇~ 会尽力而为~
再问： 那就拜托啦,等我多赚点分给你追加昂,最近顾不上赚分,搞得分好低,呵呵
再答： 没事~ 写文章纯属是有爱~ 不过以我的水平要改的够拿出手保守估计可能一篇得半个小时~ 不知道可来得及了~ An unforgettable accident has been haunting in my heart for all these recent days.Datingback to 7th May in this year, when I was studying in Jilin Agricultural University,we hadProfesior Jim as our teacher. Professor Jim was quite a strict teacher,and has formlylodged that anyone in the class who ever dare to preform an absence without a reasonableexplaination will be marked no more than fail by him.In order to make sure not to getfailed, I went to the classroom very early cach day, and took notes as carefull as I canin the class. Fortunately, we have soon found that professor Jim is aslo anoutstanding teacher,who's able to make his lectur pretty attractive.About 1 hour later after the class bagins,Professor Jim began to call the roll. I was veryhappy about this, because I thought after the roll has been taken, it might be the time toleave. After the roll has been taken, I went back to my place, and enjoyed a nap.Unexpectively, my phone began toring after about 2 hours, and woke me up.It was a classmate:"Hey, where have you been, fat man?We have been trying to call you. Why did't you just pick the call?—— You know? You arenow seriously in trouble. We had an in-class test after you went, and the professor wasquite unpleasant about your leave.You gonna talk to the professor and make up the test!"Shockingly, I was totally silenced.I was absolutely suppose to be more seriouse aboutthis.How stupid I was. Then I just keep telling me: must be more seriouse next time~ mustbe more serious next time...... 第二篇完成 按这个速度在做下一篇~ 话说楼主~ 来得及否~？
字数超限制了~ 楼主来个追问~ 我给发第三篇~ 第三篇
nature, and the value of life. And leaves audiances profound impressions that might be cherished deep into the their heart, their soul,and their memory.
The shawshank redemption is exactly such a real classic film like this. Although this film didn't win the Award of Academy in the year when it was nominated, no one would ever deny the very truth that this film was so impressive that deserves the evaluation: uncrowned king.
The shawshank redemption tells a story about hope.The banker, Andy has been thrown
into the jail,for the wrong judgement made by the court. Even throgh, to him it was an unjust treatment, Andy didn't lose his perseverance, sincerity and wisdom,and won respect from most of his jailmates.At the end of the film, after year when Andy's prison break finanlly end up with a completely success, bring him back to ther freedom; when Andy and Rheet once again, meet each other at the beach, facing each other with a sincere smell, this moving senario is also to be cherished, long in people's mamory, and shall finally become classic.
额~ 不知道我的思路楼主受不受用~ 工程太大了~ 要是这样写觉得太挫了就算了~ 先小搞了一下第一篇.水平有限.
再问： 哪有啊，非常棒的昂，谢谢啦，能否继续下。不用太复杂，我考试作文用的，呵呵。
再答： 楼主喜欢就好~ 话说吃完饭我再努力一下吧~~
再问： 太帅了，谢谢,咱能不能速度下,我着急用,一会儿就得打印出来.不用太复杂,语法和拼写上没啥大问题就行昂.
再答： 我这6点已经在吃晚饭了~ 马上我来研究下一篇~ 会尽力而为~
再问： 那就拜托啦,等我多赚点分给你追加昂,最近顾不上赚分,搞得分好低,呵呵
再答： 没事~ 写文章纯属是有爱~ 不过以我的水平要改的够拿出手保守估计可能一篇得半个小时~ 不知道可来得及了~ An unforgettable accident has been haunting in my heart for all these recent days.Datingback to 7th May in this year, when I was studying in Jilin Agricultural University,we hadProfesior Jim as our teacher. Professor Jim was quite a strict teacher,and has formlylodged that anyone in the class who ever dare to preform an absence without a reasonableexplaination will be marked no more than fail by him.In order to make sure not to getfailed, I went to the classroom very early cach day, and took notes as carefull as I canin the class. Fortunately, we have soon found that professor Jim is aslo anoutstanding teacher,who's able to make his lectur pretty attractive.About 1 hour later after the class bagins,Professor Jim began to call the roll. I was veryhappy about this, because I thought after the roll has been taken, it might be the time toleave. After the roll has been taken, I went back to my place, and enjoyed a nap.Unexpectively, my phone began toring after about 2 hours, and woke me up.It was a classmate:"Hey, where have you been, fat man?We have been trying to call you. Why did't you just pick the call?—— You know? You arenow seriously in trouble. We had an in-class test after you went, and the professor wasquite unpleasant about your leave.You gonna talk to the professor and make up the test!"Shockingly, I was totally silenced.I was absolutely suppose to be more seriouse aboutthis.How stupid I was. Then I just keep telling me: must be more seriouse next time~ mustbe more serious next time...... 第二篇完成 按这个速度在做下一篇~ 话说楼主~ 来得及否~？
字数超限制了~ 楼主来个追问~ 我给发第三篇~ 第三篇