我这有一篇英语演讲稿,请帮我看一下哪有错：Hello!Everyone!Today is Thursday,April

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我这有一篇英语演讲稿,请帮我看一下哪有错：Hello!Everyone!Today is Thursday,April 18th.The weather
is sunny.It's my duty today.I will tell you about summer.
Well.every one knows summer is coming.We put out our sweater,coat and put on T-shirt,shorts and so on.But in summer,the weather is changeable.So dont wear clothes so cool .Thats bad for your health.In summer,the weather is so hot.So we often go swimming in the swimming pool.But I will tell you something ---Don't swim in a river or a lake.If you swim in the XianYang lake,I think,I will be not sure that you are right.So summer is coming .Lets welcome it together.
That's all,thanks for listening.

The weather is sunny.太汉语化,改成It's sunny .
put out 换成put away,收起来的意思
T-shirt后面加s变复数
I think,I will be not sure that you are right改成I don't think you will be right.
So summer is coming .Lets welcome it together改成As summer is coming ,lets welcome it together.更好一些.

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