神马作文网哪位好心人能帮我看看这篇雅思作文值多少分啊?并且如果想得6.5分需要改进的是什么?
来源：学生作业帮 编辑：神马作文网作业帮 分类：综合作业 时间：2024/09/23 13:26:32
哪位好心人能帮我看看这篇雅思作文值多少分啊?并且如果想得6.5分需要改进的是什么?
问：
Some people believe that giving heavier penalties to crime such extending imprisonment is the best way to
reduce crime.Others, however, think this will have little effect
and other measures are needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
问：
Some people believe that giving heavier penalties to crime such extending imprisonment is the best way to
reduce crime.Others, however, think this will have little effect
and other measures are needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
呵呵,有待改进,错漏点较多,句式较简单.加油
哪位好心人能帮我看看这篇雅思作文值多少分啊?并且如果想得6.5分需要改进的是什么?
哪位大神能帮我看看这篇托福作文看能给多少分
大家帮我看看这篇雅思作文的多少分
帮我看看这篇雅思写作文章能拿多少分?
大神们帮我看看这篇雅思作文能得多少分
帮我看看这篇雅思作文能得多少分
雅思作文,请问大家看看我能拿多少分.
有篇雅思小作文哪位高手帮忙看看能得计分,有错请批评指正（这是剑桥雅思4 Text3里的WRITING TASK1）
帮我点评一下这篇托福作文,看看能多少分
请大家帮我看看这篇英语作文能有多少分?
哪位好心人帮我看看这几个是什么字.
帮我看看下面的作文有什么语法方面的错误并纠正,如果20分的作文这篇可以给多少分?