求批改作文~when talked about the heated question whether living i

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求批改作文~
when talked about the heated question whether living in a extended family is good or not,some people deem that it plays an indispesable role in reinforce family ties.some others,who objected to it, argue that it is not essention.i am inclined to the formor due to three reasons.

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when talked(1) about the heated question whether living in a(2) extended family is good or not,some people deem that it plays an indispesable（4） role in reinforce（5） family ties.some others,who objected to it,argue that it is not essention(6).I am inclined to the formor(7) due to three reasons.
1talked-talking
2a-an
3indispesable -indispensable不可替代的
4reinforce-reinforcing
5objected-object,用动词原形
6essention-essential
7formor-former前者
修改后的文章如下：
When talking about the heated question whether living in an extended family is good or not,some people deem that it plays an indispenable role in reinforcing family ties.some others,who objectto it,argue that it is not essential.I am inclined to the former point of view due to three reasons.

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