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老师您好，这是我自己写的作文，请帮我批改一下，谢谢
解题思路： 理解内容，设置框架，修改句法和语法
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下
About two months ago our government make 变过去式a decision that people who won't pay the toll for the highway定语从句少主句. The good policy attract more people who want to travel.搭配欠妥 they think it is 多余very convenient for them.
However，it isn't really well改good.Because it has more改many disadvantages. For example 后加逗号the traffic get 单数more heavy 比较级不对and the去掉 many tourist spots get 可省略crowded，such as the Great Wall，however逻辑不对，应为并列或递进，many people always throw rubbish casually，so the cleaners are always in trouble.困境吗，应很忙碌吧
In my opinion，though the decision of government is good for the people who want to travel，it's also have more disadvantages重复，so people should protect the environment consciously.
改文：
About two months ago our government made a decision that people who would like to tour won't pay the toll for the highway,so that it led to more people travelling. they think it very convenient for them.
However，it isn't completely good ，because it has more disadvantages. For example the traffic gets heavier and many tourist spots crowded，such as the Great Wall。Besides，many people casually throw rubbish here and there，and the cleaners are always busy .
In my opinion， the decision is good ，but people should protect the environment consciously while on the journey.
愿你满意，异议来电。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
你好，答疑如下
About two months ago our government make 变过去式a decision that people who won't pay the toll for the highway定语从句少主句. The good policy attract more people who want to travel.搭配欠妥 they think it is 多余very convenient for them.
However，it isn't really well改good.Because it has more改many disadvantages. For example 后加逗号the traffic get 单数more heavy 比较级不对and the去掉 many tourist spots get 可省略crowded，such as the Great Wall，however逻辑不对，应为并列或递进，many people always throw rubbish casually，so the cleaners are always in trouble.困境吗，应很忙碌吧
In my opinion，though the decision of government is good for the people who want to travel，it's also have more disadvantages重复，so people should protect the environment consciously.
改文：
About two months ago our government made a decision that people who would like to tour won't pay the toll for the highway,so that it led to more people travelling. they think it very convenient for them.
However，it isn't completely good ，because it has more disadvantages. For example the traffic gets heavier and many tourist spots crowded，such as the Great Wall。Besides，many people casually throw rubbish here and there，and the cleaners are always busy .
In my opinion， the decision is good ，but people should protect the environment consciously while on the journey.
愿你满意，异议来电。
最终答案：略