Let's talk about the university canteen.Canteen as an import

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Let's talk about the university canteen.Canteen as an important part of the university campus,is responsible for the students to eat every day.A good meal will provide students with adequate nutrition and energy,so that students have sufficient energy to better each lesson.But if the quality of the food is not safe,it will seriously affect the health of students.The students look forward to good food,but the dream and the reality that there is a gap between.Most school cafeteria food is hard to satisfaction.Not only that,the price of most food unbearable.Many students of poor families have to find cheaper places to eat,but the quality of cheap food cannot be guaranteed.So I hope that the government will increase subsidies to the university canteen,cafeteria should strengthen management,the only way to do that enables students three meals a day to eat well and eat at ease.

第一行,canteen后面需加逗号.
第二行,把responsible换掉.有点生硬的感觉.换一种说法.这个太Chenglish了.
第三行,so that后面的部分重复了,直接用which引导非限制性定语从句就OK,which will make.还有,better each lesson= =,换improve吧.
第四行,quality不能说safe不safe,虽然中文说质量安全,但是英文不那么说.要么你就直接food不safe,要么就是in low quality【当然,最好是别用quality这个词,用它说食物不恰当.】
不要用affect the health,还是那句话,太Chenglish了,用do harm to .
第五行,look foward to太大了,直接用want就好.而且后半句你的语序错了,应该是but there is a gap between the dream and the reality.倒装不是这么倒的.
还有,most school cafeteria food= =,不要直接这么写,加个of或者所有格不费劲.
第六行,要么就是hard to meet one's satisfaction, 要么就是below /beneath one's satisfaction.
还有,not only that是神马= =,应该说的是Besides或者In addition.
而且,后面是is unbearable.你缺了动词.
第七行,cheap food 改成cheaper food.
第八行,canteen和cafeteria中间要有连词.
第九行,management和the only之间,要么你修改上半句把他俩之间的逗号改成句号,要么就把改上面的句子然后后面再加一个连词.个人倾向于把the only 那句变成单独的一个句子.
但是,最后一行中,你the only后半句写的那句话还得改,因为我没看明白你写的啥意思= =.主谓宾完全混乱.
【可能还有些其他的地方,看的匆忙,就这样吧,这些要是改过来基本上也就没啥了.】
哦,还有就是,整篇作文整体的水平还有待提高,Chenglish的地方太多,很多时候英语的逻辑思维是不可以用中文直接去翻译过来的,所以楼主还是加油吧.嗯.

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