神马作文网谁帮我看看这段英语对不对?
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谁帮我看看这段英语对不对?
I clearly know that you don’t love me.But I don’t care that.Even,I also don’t know why.I do want to live with you together this life,so I’m really afraid oneday we met like a stranger,it’s so sad.Love a man that he don’t love you is not the best sorrow thing.But It make me so sad that we have known each other and we loved I realy realy don’t like this feeling.It make me asphyxial.
不好的地方，帮我改改，
I clearly know that you don’t love me.But I don’t care that.Even,I also don’t know why.I do want to live with you together this life,so I’m really afraid oneday we met like a stranger,it’s so sad.Love a man that he don’t love you is not the best sorrow thing.But It make me so sad that we have known each other and we loved I realy realy don’t like this feeling.It make me asphyxial.
不好的地方，帮我改改，
I clearly know that you don’t love me.But I don’t care that(.Even,)"though"I also don’t know why.I do want to live with you together this life,so I’m really afraid oneday we (met)"meet like a stranger(,)"."it’s so sad.Love a man that he (don’t)"doesn't) love you is not the best sorrow thing.But It make me so sad that we have known each other and we (loved) "were in love." I (realy realy)"really really" don’t like this feeling.It (make)"makes" me asphyxial.