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I like Spring Festival because I can spend my lucky money bu

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I like Spring Festival because I can spend my lucky money buying some beautiful decorations.
老师说我用spend不好,
然后我就改成了I can buy some beautiful decorations for myself with my luck money from my elders
不过原句究竟不好在哪?
I like Spring Festival because I can spend my lucky money bu
个人觉得你写句子的时候用了中文的思维,I can spend my lucky money buying some beautiful decorations.这句话没有必要用两个动词spend和
buy.改成I can buy some beautiful decorations with my lucky money .可能会好些诶
你改后的那句话也是同样的问题from my elders是多余的