修改,homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 i

来源：学生作业帮编辑：神马作文网作业帮分类：综合作业时间：2024/11/12 23:54:35

修改,homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 illness and so on reason.so
homeless people
in the world,because of war earthquake、 illness and so on reason.so there are so many homeless people.they have no food and water ,They can't get enough money to goTo good education,they can not get medical treatment ……we should help them ,such as :I have ever gave my all Pocket money to them ; if we not only do not help them but also look down them.in order to life ,maybe they will steal money of other people;maybe they will Grab other people ,even kill other people;maybe the war will come to our Around,then the new homeless people appear,the war also appear,homeless people will come……
oh!dear friend,help homeless people!in fact it also help Yourself!it can bring Bright!it also can bring peace!

（There are many ）homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 illness and so on . . there are so many homeless people.they have no food and water ,They can't get enough money to（ have a good） education,they can not get medical treatment ……we should help them ,such as （giving ）my all （pocket） money to them ; if we not only not help them but also look down them., maybe they will steal money of other people;maybe they will grab other people ,even kill other people;Maybe the war will come to our Around,then the new homeless people （will） appear,the war also （will） appear,homeless people will come……
oh!dear friend,help homeless people!in fact it also help Yourself!it can bring bright!it also can bring peace!
再问：好！好！好！，请再修改一下，定有重金报答

修改,homeless people in the world,because of war earthquake、 i we helped the homeless people in the earthquake [through the There are people homeless in the earthquake.A.lots of B.much The earthquake in that country left _____ people homeless. There are ___people homeless in the earthquake. The Second World War millions of people were killed in 1945 Because of the war,people in Gaza fear that their food ___ s the second world war (during which )millions of people were Most people in the world love peace and h_____ war. Ten of t_ of people died in the deadly earthquake happened i thousands of people _( die )in the earthquake in 1976 People in many parts of the world like country music because